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    • Beautiful life

    • Hey, I wrote this and I'd like to know if it's right.
    • I wish my english was better, and this is a way to improve it.
    • Thanks everyone!
    • We are living a stupid life, a hard life, a sad life... but it's a beautiful life.
    • We have to live our life, we only have one, and it's short.
    • Since we were children, people told us to study.
    • We spend our best years studying.
    • After that, when we are adults, when we really should enjoy life, we have to work, found a family and all those things.
    • Then we are old, we don't have energy enough to enjoy life. It ends.
    • So... why I said life is beautiful?
    • It's beautiful because of the people we meet, like and love.
    • We can have everything in a life: money, succes, friends, sex, family...
    • But if we don't have a love, we have nothing, we are nothing, we have an empty life.
    • Nevertheless, somebody who loves, will have a beautiful life.
    • Everybody will die.
    • Everyday, we are dying a bit.
    • We must love each other.
    • So stop being stupid and love, you will help people to have a beautiful life, and they will do the same for you.

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