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Hello.
- I live in Russia, in a small town.
- I love to learn English, because I'm interesting talking with foreign people.
- I want find new friends.
Ok, that's all.
Thanks, good bye.

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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
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- Hello.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
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- I live in Russia, in a small town.
  Undi sekarang!
- I live in Russia, in a small town.
  JacobRavn Ulasan
  
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- I live ~~in Russia,~~ in a small town in Russia.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I love to learn English, because I'm interesting talking with foreign people.
  Undi sekarang!
- I love to learn English, because talking with foreign people is interesting.¶or: I love to learn English because I'm interested ing talking with foreign people.
  JacobRavn Ulasan
  
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- I would love to learn English, because I'm interested ing talking with foreign ~~people~~ers / or with people from another countries.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I want find new friends.
  Undi sekarang!
- I w~~ant find new friends~~ould like to make new friends.¶Want --> would like to = this is more polite.¶Find --> make = friends is something you make in English.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- Ok, that's all.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
Ayat 6
- Thanks, good bye.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6

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