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• In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry.

• Why is this case?

• It is true that, however, advanced farming equipment can provide an appropriate situation in farming; a lot of hungry people live in a difficult attitude in the vast part of the world.

• The first and foremost reason for this issue is that developing nations are restricted by developed countries to access the expensive modern agricultural machines so poor nations have plenty of starved population.

• Therefore, producing food increases the expense of production is pretty high for them due to excessive (plenty) poverty of households who cannot prepare food for their families.

• Last but not least, the world population, especially in developing countries are increasing progressively while farming produces rising linear so agriculture cannot respond to the increasing requirement.

• In this society also a number of people may not pay attention to the optimal usage of farming productions and tend to extravagance food.

• For example; each day thousands of tones of foods are thrown away by restaurants that can be consumed by needy people.

• One step is that western countries can convey their advance technology and experts in developing countries such as African and Middle East countries.

• If these countries people become familiar with accurate principal agriculture to better use soil and water they will assist the government to solve this issue.

• The second step is that with the constructive (practical) advertising at school to teach students and on social media to teach households how they should have correct usage of food materials and do not throw them away easily.

• Perhaps this method can affect (influence) to reduce the amount of food go to waste.