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    • In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry.
    • Why is this case?
  • What can be done about this problem?
    • It is true that, however, advanced farming equipment can provide an appropriate situation in farming; a lot of hungry people live in a difficult attitude in the vast part of the world.
  • This essay will analyze this issue and attempt to find some practical solutions for this problem.
  • There are two main reasons why improving agriculture cannot deal with the starvation problem.
    • The first and foremost reason for this issue is that developing nations are restricted by developed countries to access the expensive modern agricultural machines so poor nations have plenty of starved population.
    • Therefore, producing food increases the expense of production is pretty high for them due to excessive (plenty) poverty of households who cannot prepare food for their families.
    • Last but not least, the world population, especially in developing countries are increasing progressively while farming produces rising linear so agriculture cannot respond to the increasing requirement.
    • In this society also a number of people may not pay attention to the optimal usage of farming productions and tend to extravagance food.
    • For example; each day thousands of tones of foods are thrown away by restaurants that can be consumed by needy people.
  • There are, however, some workable solutions to help governments and citizens to cope with this horrible phenomenon.
    • One step is that western countries can convey their advance technology and experts in developing countries such as African and Middle East countries.
    • If these countries people become familiar with accurate principal agriculture to better use soil and water they will assist the government to solve this issue.
    • The second step is that with the constructive (practical) advertising at school to teach students and on social media to teach households how they should have correct usage of food materials and do not throw them away easily.
  • To sum up, the hunger problem will be solved if developed countries' governments support developing countries by transmitting knowledge to train households.
    • Perhaps this method can affect (influence) to reduce the amount of food go to waste.

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    • It is true that, however, advanced farming equipment can provide an appropriate situation in farming; a lot of hungry people live in a difficult attitude in the vast part of the world.
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    • It is true that, however, advanced farming equipment can provide an appropriate situation in farming; a lot of hungry people live in a difficult attitudesituation in the vast part of the world.
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    • The first and foremost reason for this issue is that developing nations are restricted by developed countries to access the expensive modern agricultural machines so poor nations have plenty of starved population.
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    • The first and foremost reason for this issue is that developing nations are restricted by developed countries toin access theing expensive modern agricultural machines so. So, poor nations have plenty of starved populationa high population starving.
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    • Therefore, producing food increases the expense of production is pretty high for them due to excessive (plenty) poverty of households who cannot prepare food for their families.
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    • Therefore, producing food increases the expense of production, which is pretty high for them due to excessive (plenty) poverty of households who cannot prepare food for their families.
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    • Last but not least, the world population, especially in developing countries are increasing progressively while farming produces rising linear so agriculture cannot respond to the increasing requirement.
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    • Last but not least, the world population, especially in developing countries, are increasing progressively while farming produceis rising linearly, so agriculture cannot respond to the increasing requirement.
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    • In this society also a number of people may not pay attention to the optimal usage of farming productions and tend to extravagance food.
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    • In this society also, a number of people may not pay attention to the optimal usage of farming productions and tend to extravagance food.
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    • One step is that western countries can convey their advance technology and experts in developing countries such as African and Middle East countries.
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    • One step is that western countries can convey their advanced technology and experts in developing countries such as African and Middle East countries.
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    • If these countries people become familiar with accurate principal agriculture to better use soil and water they will assist the government to solve this issue.
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    • If the people in these countries people become familiar with accurate principal agriculture to better use soil and water, they will assist the government to solve this issue.
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    • The second step is that with the constructive (practical) advertising at school to teach students and on social media to teach households how they should have correct usage of food materials and do not throw them away easily.
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    • The second step is that with the constructive (practical) advertising at school--how to teach students and on social media to teach households how they should have correctly usage ofe food materials and do not to throw them away easily.
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    • To sum up, the hunger problem will be solved if developed countries' governments support developing countries by transmitting knowledge to train households.
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