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    • Food is one of the fundamental needs of human’s life and because of it people always require different tastes and set up new and easy methods of preparing a meal.
    • This new searches help to make a lifestyle easier which has both positive and negative effects on our lives.
    • People want to make the methods of cooking more convenient and tastier by creating new technologies and kitchenware.
    • In fact there are enormous choices of cooking instruments and tools such as rice and meals cookers, toasters, microwaves, slicers and so forth in our modern life.
    • Moreover since there are a lot of TV shows and even Internet food blogs that can show how to use a new cooking techniques in a daily life.
    • Followers and subscribers have started to maintain their knowledge of life hacks and increase their list of simple and delicious recipes from all over the world.
    • All of it helps people to save a free time and utilize it in other tasks like education, reading and professional skills.
    • They also can spare more time with a families and friends going to shopping center, movie theaters or museums.
    • The drawback is obesity and overweighting due to ready meals and junk food which have a lot of nutrition.
    • People start to dine out in fast food establishments almost every day which can be a result of high pressure of blood or even a cancer.
    • In conclusion, the process of food preparation has become much easier and faster nowadays but there is a disadvantage that can lead to low quality of life if people would not strike the balance between fast and healthy food.

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  • Sentence 1
    • Food is one of the fundamental needs of human’s life and because of it people always require different tastes and set up new and easy methods of preparing a meal.
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    • Food is one of the fundamental needs ofor all humans lifeto live, and because of it, people always require different tastes and set up new and easy methods of preparing a meal.
    • Food is one of thea fundamental needs of human’s life and because of it people always require different tastes and set up new and easy methods of preparing a mealrequirement for sustaining life. Most people have a variety of tastes, or preferences, and prefer food preparation schemes that are simple but effective.
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  • Sentence 2
    • This new searches help to make a lifestyle easier which has both positive and negative effects on our lives.
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    • This newese searches for new help to make a lifestyle easier, which has both positive and negative effects on our lives.
    • This new searches helpe quest for finding new ways to prepare our meals in order to make a lifestyle easier which more simple, or more convenient, has hasd both posinegative and negapositive effects on our lives.
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  • Sentence 3
    • People want to make the methods of cooking more convenient and tastier by creating new technologies and kitchenware.
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    • People want to make the methods of cooking more convenient and tastier by creating new technologies and kitchenware.create new ways, including kitchenware and technology, to make cooking methods simpler and more convenient.
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  • Sentence 4
    • In fact there are enormous choices of cooking instruments and tools such as rice and meals cookers, toasters, microwaves, slicers and so forth in our modern life.
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    • In fact, there are enormous choices of cooking instruments and tools such as rice and meals cookers, toasters, microwaves, slicers and so forth in our modern life.
    • In fact there are enormous choices of cooking instruments and tools such as rice andThere is an enormous variety of specialized cooking instruments and tools including rice cookers and other specialty meals cookers, toasters, microwaves, slicers and so forth in our modern lifeon.
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    • Moreover since there are a lot of TV shows and even Internet food blogs that can show how to use a new cooking techniques in a daily life.
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    • Moreover since, there are also a lot of TV shows and even Internet food blogs that can show how to use a new cooking techniques in a daily life.
    • Moreover since there are a lot of TV shows and even Internet food blogs that can show how to use a new cooking techniques in a daily lifeThere is also available a great many presentations available on mass media outlets, e.g., television, and on the internet, that demonstrate new / innovative methods for food preparation.
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  • Sentence 6
    • Followers and subscribers have started to maintain their knowledge of life hacks and increase their list of simple and delicious recipes from all over the world.
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    • Followers and subscribers have started to maintain their knowledge of life hacks and increase their list of simple and delicious recipes from all over the world.

      NOTE: Cannot address fixing this sentence until I know what the hell means "LIFE HACKS".... ?
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  • Sentence 7
    • All of it helps people to save a free time and utilize it in other tasks like education, reading and professional skills.
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    • All of it helps people to save a free time and utilize it in other tasks like education, reading and professional skills.
    • All of it helps people to save a free time and utilize it in other tasks like education, reading andnyway, the less time spent preparing meals frees up one to invest more time in such activities as education, reading and (improvement/development of) professional skills.
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  • Sentence 8
    • They also can spare more time with a families and friends going to shopping center, movie theaters or museums.
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    • They also can spare more time with a familiesy and friends and going to shopping center, movie theaters or museums.
    • They also can sparhave more time with ato spend with their families and friends going to, shopping, center, movie theaters inema, and/or museums.
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  • Sentence 9
    • The drawback is obesity and overweighting due to ready meals and junk food which have a lot of nutrition.
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    • The drawback is obesity andcoming overweighting due to ready meals and junk food which have a lot of nutritionmeals being more convenient to get.
    • TheA major drawback is obesity and overweighting due to ra tendency toward obesity by the ingestion of quick and eadsy meals and junk food which have a lot ofwhich are often little more than "junk food" and thus full of empty calories of little or no nutritional value.
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  • Sentence 10
    • People start to dine out in fast food establishments almost every day which can be a result of high pressure of blood or even a cancer.
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    • People start to dine out in fast food establishments almost every day which can be a result of highin people getting high blood pressure of blood or even a cancer.
    • People start to dine out in fast food establishments almostA trend towards increased consumption of so-called "fast food", sometimes everyn day which can be a result of high pressure of blood or even aily, has been linked to increased blood pressure and a higher risk of cancer.
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  • Sentence 11
    • In conclusion, the process of food preparation has become much easier and faster nowadays but there is a disadvantage that can lead to low quality of life if people would not strike the balance between fast and healthy food.
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    • In conclusion, the process of food preparation has become much easier and faster nowadays, but there is a disadvantage that can lead to low quality of life if people would not strike the balance between fast food and healthy food.
    • InTo conclusion, the process of food preparation has become much easier and faster nowadays but there is a disadvantagede: While there are advantages in faster and/or more efficient food preparation, one must nonetheless adhere to a dietary regimen that is nutrition and not succumb to nutritional "short cuts" that can lead toresult in lower quality of life if people woulfood npot strike the balance between fast and healthy foodentially harmful to one's health and well-being.
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