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  • Personally, I think that it is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than to learn facts.
    • First of all, it is impossible to learn everything, because there are too many facts and details in each field of studies.
  • Learning all of them is impossible.
  • I remember a girl from my class who used to try to remember every single detail from textbooks.
  • She was nervous, she cried a lot, because she was not able to do it – after all, we are not robots!
    • That is why my university professors never bothered us with learning all the details, dates, names and so on.
    • They wanted us to understand the ideas, to express our opinion, to make science-based predictions.
    • Secondly, there is no point in learning every single detail by heart, because nowadays everything can be found in the Internet.
    • Moreover, the computer is much faster than our brain, and it does not make any mistakes.
    • For example, when it comes to numbers, a calculator will always be more accurate and reliable, than a human being.
    • However, the artificial intelligence cannot produce original ideas and concepts.
  • A good scientist cannot be replaced by a computer.
    • Thirdly, if you understand ideas and concepts, it means that you can apply your knowledge in different fields of studies.
    • For example, if you learn the date of, for example, Russian Revolution, you will just know a single fact.
    • But if you understand the reasons of revolutions, if you can say, which events can lead to it, then you start to think like a real scientist.
    • This kind of knowledge can be applied in History, Sociology, Political Science and so on.
    • To sum up, I would like to say that there is no point in meaningless learning.
    • Students should understand the material, not learn it, like a poem.

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    • Personally, I think that it is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than to learn facts.
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    • First of all, it is impossible to learn everything, because there are too many facts and details in each field of studies.
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    • First of all, it is impossible to learn everything, because there are too many facts and details in eachvery field of studiesy.
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    • That is why my university professors never bothered us with learning all the details, dates, names and so on.
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    • That is why myour university professors never botherexpected us withto learning all the (memorize) every details, dates, names and so on.
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    • Secondly, there is no point in learning every single detail by heart, because nowadays everything can be found in the Internet.
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    • Secondly, there is no point in learning every single detail by heart, because nowadays everything can be found i since one can now find most "facts" on the Iinternet.
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    • Moreover, the computer is much faster than our brain, and it does not make any mistakes.
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    • Moreover, the computer is much faster than our brain, and it does not make any mistakes.

      NOTE: While "it" might not make mistakes, the information entered into its "pages" are often in error, sometimes intentionally sometimes accidentally. The internet is rife with incorrect and/or "mis" information.
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    • For example, when it comes to numbers, a calculator will always be more accurate and reliable, than a human being.
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    • For example, when it comes to numbers, a calculator will always be more accurate and reliable, than a human being.
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    • Thirdly, if you understand ideas and concepts, it means that you can apply your knowledge in different fields of studies.
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    • Thirdly, if you understand ideas and concepts, it means that you canyou can usually apply yourthis knowledge into different fields of studies.
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    • Thirdly, if you understand ideas and concepts, it means that you can apply your knowledge in different fields of studiesy.
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    • For example, if you learn the date of, for example, Russian Revolution, you will just know a single fact.
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    • For example, if you learn the date of, for example, the Russian Revolution, you will just know a single fact.

      NOTE: Ah -- but "which" Russian Revolution? There is more than just the event of October 1917.
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    • But if you understand the reasons of revolutions, if you can say, which events can lead to it, then you start to think like a real scientist.
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    • But if youhaving an understand of the reasons of revolutions, if you can say, which events cancause(s) of the revolution and the event which lead to it, then youyou are starting to think like a real scientist.
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