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  • Business letter

  • We have met with you at distribution CITEL conference in Moscow in April 2012.
  • My name is Porphyry TELEGIN, I am the General Director of _________ (Moscow, Russia) and during the last 3 years our company is the official distributor of CITEL.
    • During the cooperation of our companies we have trained our staff, set up and maintain warehouse equipment CITEL in Moscow, regularly place orders and pay for the supplied equipment.
    • Companies such as _______ are some of our customers who buys regularly CITEL equipment.
  • We regularly receive from our customers only positive reviews about your products.
    • Among the staff of our company there are technicians and sales managers who speak English and German languages.
  • Our company _________implements: • delivery of equipment to Russia, • customs clearance, • support for CITEL warehouse, • delivery to the end customers, • receipt of payments from customers and • transfer of funds to the account of CITEL GmbH in Germany.
  • Considering the investment we made in promotion of the brand and CITEL equipment in Russia, our CITEL warehouse in Moscow, business relationships with our customers, we express our interest in further cooperation with your company.
  • SPD market in Russia is promising, and together with CITEL we want to achieve even greater success in our common business.
  • To negotiate and discuss a concrete plan of action we have the honor to invite you to Moscow in the near future.
    • For our part, we can also fly to France to meet with you.
    • Please advise as soon as possible about your decision so we started to organize our meeting.
  • Sincerely, Porphyry TELEGIN CEO XXX

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    • My name is Porphyry TELEGIN, I am the General Director of _________ (Moscow, Russia) and during the last 3 years our company is the official distributor of CITEL.
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    • During the cooperation of our companies we have trained our staff, set up and maintain warehouse equipment CITEL in Moscow, regularly place orders and pay for the supplied equipment.
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    • During the cooperation of our companies we have trained our staff, set up and maintained warehouse equipment CITEL in Moscow, regularly placed orders and payed for the supplied equipment.
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    • Our company _________implements: • delivery of equipment to Russia, • customs clearance, • support for CITEL warehouse, • delivery to the end customers, • receipt of payments from customers and • transfer of funds to the account of CITEL GmbH in Germany.
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    • Considering the investment we made in promotion of the brand and CITEL equipment in Russia, our CITEL warehouse in Moscow, business relationships with our customers, we express our interest in further cooperation with your company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • SPD market in Russia is promising, and together with CITEL we want to achieve even greater success in our common business.
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    • To negotiate and discuss a concrete plan of action we have the honor to invite you to Moscow in the near future.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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