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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par mamadboss - English

    • would you mind correcting my story

    • This happened to me when I was walking towards a forest park with my friend Masoud in the east of Tehran.
    • It was a long journey and the weather was really hot.
  • The more we walked, the more tired we became.
    • After two hours of brisk walk, I said to my friend: I'm really tired and he said: So am i.
    • So we took a rest near some trees and a gentle breeze blew towards us and cooled us down.
    • Because it was summer and the weather was scorching I opened my backpack to grab my bottle of water and after searching my backpack I realized that I had left my bottle inside the home.
    • I was looking at the sky desperately when my friend shared his bottle with me and as gratitude, I flashed a broad smile at him.
    • Suddenly I spotted a snake behind my friend and I tried to keep a safe distance from it.
    • At that moment I was shocked and a shiver ran through my spine just because I hadn't been ready for it.
    • Although the snake looked harmless and didn't move, I decided to adopt more safety measures through peering at snake and leave it alone.
    • After that to calm my nerves, I took three deep breathes.
    • In the end, I realized that any dangerous creature can exist everywhere s you have to be careful and as a precautionary measure it's better to carry a first-aid pack

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