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Text from Maryam1987 - English

  • Would you please correct my text? Thank you so much.

    • There has long been a heated controversy over the strategical policies to fight unemployment crisis.
    • It is argued by some that paying unemployment benefits on a regular basis demotivates people in finding an occupation and wastes national wealth.
    • In my opinion citizens are entitled for unemployment benefits, however the state should closely monitor those who receive theses benefits.
  • On the one hand, countries’ financial resources should be allocated to provide permanent residents with a minimum standard of life.
    • That is, the state, as the main authority in a country, should shoulder the responsibility of addressing social diseases such as unemployment, an effective way of which is to allocate some parts of its revenue to regular payments for the jobless.
  • Not only could it enhance overall citizen satisfaction, but it is bound to reduce statistics of petty crimes such as shop-lifting that are rooted in unemployment and ill-suited financial policies.
  • Take those how have lost their earning capability as an example.
    • Since there are too few vacancies for them, government should pay them financial aids while they are seeking for a job.
  • On the other hand, financial supports for unoccupied workforce may prove to be detrimental for the industrial economy.
    • That is, if is not controlled by strict regulations, this policy may render working-age population reluctant to work, thereby spelling labour shortage troubles in labour market.Once community members, from all walks of life, are given the opportunity to receive a regular payment, they may hesitate to seek for a job and prefer to lead a simple and comfortable life with their unemployment benefits.
    • This, in a long run, reduces the number of proficient workforces and disturbs business and industry.
    • Therefore, the government should take the initiative to restrict unemployment compensation to those who are challenging serious problems such as physical disabilities.
  • In conclusion, I believe authorities should spend a major part of their funding on regularly paid money for the jobless.
    • Nevertheless, they should put the highest effort into identifying those who certainly need governments’ financial aids.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • It is argued by some that paying unemployment benefits on a regular basis demotivates people in finding an occupation and wastes national wealth.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • It is argued by some that paying unemployment benefits on a regular basis demotivates people in finding an occupation and wastes national wealth.
      nadalgiabaonadalgiabao profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • In my opinion citizens are entitled for unemployment benefits, however the state should closely monitor those who receive theses benefits.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In my opinion, citizens are entitled forto unemployment benefits, however, the state should closely monitor those who receive theses benefits.
      nadalgiabaonadalgiabao profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • On the one hand, countries’ financial resources should be allocated to provide permanent residents with a minimum standard of life.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • That is, the state, as the main authority in a country, should shoulder the responsibility of addressing social diseases such as unemployment, an effective way of which is to allocate some parts of its revenue to regular payments for the jobless.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • That is, the state, as the main authority in a country, should shoulder the responsibility of addressing social diseases such as unemployment, an effective way of which is to allocate some parts of its revenue to regular payments for the jobless.
      nadalgiabaonadalgiabao profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • Not only could it enhance overall citizen satisfaction, but it is bound to reduce statistics of petty crimes such as shop-lifting that are rooted in unemployment and ill-suited financial policies.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • On the other hand, financial supports for unoccupied workforce may prove to be detrimental for the industrial economy.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • That is, if is not controlled by strict regulations, this policy may render working-age population reluctant to work, thereby spelling labour shortage troubles in labour market.Once community members, from all walks of life, are given the opportunity to receive a regular payment, they may hesitate to seek for a job and prefer to lead a simple and comfortable life with their unemployment benefits.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • That is, if t is not controlled by strict regulations, this policy may render the working-age population reluctant to work, thereby spelling labour shortage troubles in the labour market. Once community members, from all walks of life, are given the opportunity to receive a regular payment, they may hesitate to seek for a job and prefer to lead a simple and comfortable life with their unemployment benefits.
      nadalgiabaonadalgiabao profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • Therefore, the government should take the initiative to restrict unemployment compensation to those who are challenging serious problems such as physical disabilities.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Therefore, the government should take the initiative to restrict unemployment compensation to those who are challenging serious problems such as physical disabilities.
      nadalgiabaonadalgiabao profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • In conclusion, I believe authorities should spend a major part of their funding on regularly paid money for the jobless.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14