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  • Elephants

  • Elephants are outstanding animals.
  • Despite their huge size, they can move very fast (up to 40 kph).
    • They also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wasted.
    • Not only do elephants have impressive physical power, but they also can show such warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
    • If elephants see that one of them is in trouble, they will try to help at any cost.
  • But a man should not abuse elephants' generosity because this massive and kind animal can easily strangle a man with its trunk.
    • And do not try to take a photo of an elephant because a new iPhone is very expensive.

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    • They also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wasted.
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    • They can also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wasted.
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    • They also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wastednow you'd seen everything.¶

      NOTE: Your original statement is "working" to express the sense of a rarely observed phenomenon; in English we express this as "one has now seen it all"      .
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    • Not only do elephants have impressive physical power, but they also can show such warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
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    • Not only do elephants have impressive physical powerforce, but they also can show such warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
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    • Not only do elephants have impressive physical power, but they also can show suchre capable of expressing such tender or warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
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    • But a man should not abuse elephants' generosity because this massive and kind animal can easily strangle a man with its trunk.
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