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Elephants
Elephants are outstanding animals.
Despite their huge size, they can move very fast (up to 40 kph).
- They also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wasted.
- Not only do elephants have impressive physical power, but they also can show such warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
- If elephants see that one of them is in trouble, they will try to help at any cost.
But a man should not abuse elephants' generosity because this massive and kind animal can easily strangle a man with its trunk.
- And do not try to take a photo of an elephant because a new iPhone is very expensive.

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- Despite their huge size, they can move very fast (up to 40 kph).
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- They also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wasted.
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- They can also ~~can~~ swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that your life is not wasted.
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- They also can swim and if you saw an elephant swimming, you may say that ~~your life is not wasted~~now you'd seen everything.¶
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- Not only do elephants have impressive physical power, but they also can show such warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
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- Not only do elephants have impressive ~~physical power~~force, but they also can show ~~such~~ warm feelings to each other as love, compassion and loyalty.
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- Not only do elephants have impressive physical power, but they a~~lso can show such~~re capable of expressing such tender or warm feelings ~~to each other~~ as love, compassion and loyalty.
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- If elephants see that one of them is in trouble, they will try to help at any cost.
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- If elephants see that one of them is in trouble, they will try to help it at any cost.
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- IfWhen elephants see that ~~one of them is~~another elephant ins trouble, they will try to help ait any cost.
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- But a man should not abuse elephants' generosity because this massive and kind animal can easily strangle a man with its trunk.
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- And do not try to take a photo of an elephant because a new iPhone is very expensive.
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- And do not try to take a photo of an elephant, because a new iPhone is very expensive.
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- And ~~do not try to take a~~never attempt to photo ofgraph an elephant ~~because~~: the cost of a new iPhone is very expensive. (-:
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