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  • Personal Statement 1

  • I cannot remember exactly when I decided to be a filmmaker.
  • I have always liked to watch movies.
  • I must admit that I spent a good fraction of my childhood in front of the TV, zapping from channel to channel, searching for some movie to watch.
  • It could be anything, an adventure of a Greek hero at ancient times or an astronaut discovering alien life on a distant galaxy.
  • Early in my life, movies become a hobby and objects of fascination.
  • When I was a teenager, my uncle open a new busness in my small hometown: a video rental shop.
  • I would spent my afternoons there, helping him, recomending movies for the clients, cleaning the shelvings.
  • My uncle could not pay for someone to work there, so I proposed him a deal: I would help him all afternoons in exchange to rent for free as much video tapes (DVD was something rare and expensive at the time) as I would be able to watch.
  • It was the time of the passion.
  • I worked to my uncle for two years or so (he paid me a small salary after a while), but it was worthy because during this time I have watched problably hundreds of movies, from everywhere in the world, about anything.
  • My taste for movies was unrestricted, I would watch anything, from war action movie to chick flicks.
  • I grew up and had to make decisions about my future, especially in what concerns about education.
  • I received a scholarship to study film at the only college which offers this major at my state.
  • I had to move from countryside to the capital.
  • I spent 4 years studying film.
  • It was the time the passion become love.
  • On the contrary of what one would imagine, discover about the manufactiring of movie, learn that all that magic was actually a number of illusionism very well rehearsed, do not made me lost my interest in film; in contrary, made me want it even more, becauseI learned that I was able to make my own movies as well.
  • A man have to be born a wizard, but he can make himself a illusionist.

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    • I must admit that I spent a good fraction of my childhood in front of the TV, zapping from channel to channel, searching for some movie to watch.
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    • It could be anything, an adventure of a Greek hero at ancient times or an astronaut discovering alien life on a distant galaxy.
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    • I would spent my afternoons there, helping him, recomending movies for the clients, cleaning the shelvings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • My uncle could not pay for someone to work there, so I proposed him a deal: I would help him all afternoons in exchange to rent for free as much video tapes (DVD was something rare and expensive at the time) as I would be able to watch.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I worked to my uncle for two years or so (he paid me a small salary after a while), but it was worthy because during this time I have watched problably hundreds of movies, from everywhere in the world, about anything.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • On the contrary of what one would imagine, discover about the manufactiring of movie, learn that all that magic was actually a number of illusionism very well rehearsed, do not made me lost my interest in film; in contrary, made me want it even more, becauseI learned that I was able to make my own movies as well.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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