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    • fathers and sons

  • “It is not flesh and blood, but heart which makes us fathers and sons”, said Johann Friedrich Von Schiller.
  • The relationship between Fathers and Sons should be based on a mutual long term love and respect than hate and disrespect.
  • Some fathers change their attitudes towards their sons once they become young.
  • There is no longer softer caress, gentle words and playing games which the sons were used to.
  • However, they are replaced by nag, insults and sometimes by violence .This new behavior is interpreted by the majority of sons as that their fathers do not love them anymore, when it is due to many other reasons.
  • Many of them do not know how to deal with their sons because they also did not get that from their fathers when they were young, so they are confused.
  • Secondly, some fathers think that working a lot will provide a better life for their kids.
  • So they are most of the time absent from home and even when they are at home they are very exhausted and could not devote enough time to their kids.
  • Finally, most of the fathers are afraid of being closer to their sons and be a friend for them.
  • They think if their sons misused it, they will lose the authority they have inside their families.
  • The fathers then, establish a kind of a respect relationship between them and their kids.
  • To sum up, Mr. Walter M.
  • Schirra, Sr said: “You don't raise heroes, you raise sons.
  • And if you treat them like sons, they'll turn out to be heroes, even if it's just in your own eyes.” Even fathers and sons experience some tension and aggravation with one another, but their relationship remains one of the longest lasting social ties human beings establish; as long as the cordiality and esteem reign between them.

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    • “It is not flesh and blood, but heart which makes us fathers and sons”, said Johann Friedrich Von Schiller.
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    • The relationship between Fathers and Sons should be based on a mutual long term love and respect than hate and disrespect.
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    • However, they are replaced by nag, insults and sometimes by violence .This new behavior is interpreted by the majority of sons as that their fathers do not love them anymore, when it is due to many other reasons.
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    • Many of them do not know how to deal with their sons because they also did not get that from their fathers when they were young, so they are confused.
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    • So they are most of the time absent from home and even when they are at home they are very exhausted and could not devote enough time to their kids.
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    • And if you treat them like sons, they'll turn out to be heroes, even if it's just in your own eyes.” Even fathers and sons experience some tension and aggravation with one another, but their relationship remains one of the longest lasting social ties human beings establish; as long as the cordiality and esteem reign between them.
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