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my life now
- TOday is terrible.
- I'm sick and today has a show from my favorite band and i can't go for this.
- Tomorrow have a festival and i doubt that i'm not gonna go sick.
- I'm tired to work but i don't have enough money to buy my motorcycle and still have the university that i want to entry bur is very hard and i can't stydy...

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- TOday is terrible.
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- TOoday iwas terrible.
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- I'm sick and today has a show from my favorite band and i can't go for this.
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- I'm sick, and today hathere is a show ~~from~~with my favorite band ~~and i~~, but I can't go ~~for this~~.
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- Tomorrow have a festival and i doubt that i'm not gonna go sick.
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- T~~omorrow have~~here is a festival tomorrow and i doubt that i~~'m not gonna go~~ can go there because i am sick.
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- I'm tired to work but i don't have enough money to buy my motorcycle and still have the university that i want to entry bur is very hard and i can't stydy...
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- I'm already tired tof work buing and yet i don't have enough money to buy mya motorcycle ~~and~~. I still ~~have~~want to enter to the uUniversity ~~that i want to entry bur~~but it is very hard ~~and~~because i cadon't have time to styudy... ¶
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