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    • Brazil is famous because its beaches, its music, its soccer; however, anyone would say Brazil is famous because its movies.
  • We never had a tradition of film industry, although from time to time a Brazilian film become a big hit in the country; to cite, it recently happened with City of God and Elite Squad.
  • During much time I wondered why those movies made success, while the destiny of the most part of the contemporary Brazilians movies it is to be screened a couple of times on film festivals and then become a precious asset in the drawer of the filmmaker.
  • What is present in those absolutely popular movies that is lacking in the movies of my friends and in my own smal experiments.
  • Money, of course, it is the first reason, we do not have an industry down here.
  • To fund a movie, a producer has to endeavour through a tortuous and bureaucratic path through public funding oportunities, asides make a lot of politics and had a good bit of luck.
  • Despite this fact, I still kept thinking that we lack of something more.
  • I did not do any scientific research to base this idea and I was guided by my intuition to rationalize this: Brazilians movies, specially movies made by young filmmakers, lack of narrative structure, of technique and qualified staff.
  • The fact that we do not have a film industry here led our filmmakers to treat a movie rather as a piece of art then a product to be sold.
  • Brazilian filmmakers wat to do great films, want to make great success; but they do not know how to do that, because we are not used to that.
  • City of God and Elite Squad were succesful because during the time they were made its directors and screenwriters took into consideration basics pillars of storytelling.
  • Storytellers are present in the human history since its beginning.
  • The social role of a filmmaker is not much different of a bard, both come to this world to entertain, thrill and make think.
  • A screenwriter is just a craftsman and like any craft in the world, screenwriting can be learnt.

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    • Brazil is famous because its beaches, its music, its soccer; however, anyone would say Brazil is famous because its movies.
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    • Brazil is famous because of its beaches, its music, its soccer;, however, anyno one would say Brazil is famous because of its movies.
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    • Brazil is famous because of its beaches, its music, and its soccer; h. However, anyno one would say that Brazil is famous becausefor its movies.
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    • We never had a tradition of film industry, although from time to time a Brazilian film become a big hit in the country; to cite, it recently happened with City of God and Elite Squad.
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    • During much time I wondered why those movies made success, while the destiny of the most part of the contemporary Brazilians movies it is to be screened a couple of times on film festivals and then become a precious asset in the drawer of the filmmaker.
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    • What is present in those absolutely popular movies that is lacking in the movies of my friends and in my own smal experiments.
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    • To fund a movie, a producer has to endeavour through a tortuous and bureaucratic path through public funding oportunities, asides make a lot of politics and had a good bit of luck.
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    • I did not do any scientific research to base this idea and I was guided by my intuition to rationalize this: Brazilians movies, specially movies made by young filmmakers, lack of narrative structure, of technique and qualified staff.
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    • The fact that we do not have a film industry here led our filmmakers to treat a movie rather as a piece of art then a product to be sold.
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    • Brazilian filmmakers wat to do great films, want to make great success; but they do not know how to do that, because we are not used to that.
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    • City of God and Elite Squad were succesful because during the time they were made its directors and screenwriters took into consideration basics pillars of storytelling.
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    • The social role of a filmmaker is not much different of a bard, both come to this world to entertain, thrill and make think.
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