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    • Hi Angela, Rita is one of my best friends and I think she is a suitable person to be an au pair in your family.
    • She is 26 and she graduated in English philology, so her English is on a good level.
    • She is currently working at the literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distant work on the museum website content, therefore it wouldn't be a problem for her to go to the US.
    • Rita is a charming girl and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that's why I think she can get along easily with children, even not having younger siblings in her family.
    • In her free time, Rita likes reading (mostly poetry) and watching series (she is a great fan of Game of Thrones).
    • She is independent and it's no problem for her to be sometimes alone and do things on her own.
    • The only negative moment is that Rita is a little bit disorganized and it can be difficult for her to follow the schedule all the time.
    • But, as I already have mentioned, she is a very nice person and I'm sure you will like her.
    • All the best, Anna

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    • Hi Angela, Rita is one of my best friends and I think she is a suitable person to be an au pair in your family.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Hi Angela,¶

      Rita is one of my best friends and I think she       iswould make a suitable person to be an au pair infor your family.
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    • She is currently working at the literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distant work on the museum website content, therefore it wouldn't be a problem for her to go to the US.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • She is currently working at the literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distant work on the museum website content, therefore, it wouldn't be a problem for her to go to the US.
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    • She is currentlyWhile she is now working at the literary museum, but what she is doing there is a distant work on the museum website content, thereforethe work she does for the museum is performed via telecommuting, and thus it wouldn't be a problem for her to go to the USA.
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    • Rita is a charming girl and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that's why I think she can get along easily with children, even not having younger siblings in her family.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Rita is a charming girl and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that's why I think she can get along easily with children, eventhough not having younger siblings in her family.
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    • Rita is a charming girl, and she's also very sensitive to what other people need, that'despite not having grown up with siblings, she's nonetheless very sensitive the needs of others, which is why I think she canwould get along easilywell with children, even not having younger siblings in her family.
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    • In her free time, Rita likes reading (mostly poetry) and watching series (she is a great fan of Game of Thrones).
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    • In her free time, Rita likeenjoys reading (most- mainly poetry) -- and watching some television series (she is a great fan of Game of Thrones).
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    • She is independent and it's no problem for her to be sometimes alone and do things on her own.
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    • She is a independent and it's no problem for her to be sometimes alone and do thingsly minded person who likes to do things on her own, so it would not likely be a problem for her to be left on her own at times.
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    • The only negative moment is that Rita is a little bit disorganized and it can be difficult for her to follow the schedule all the time.
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    • The only negative momentOne potential drawback is that Rita is a littlecan be a bit disorganized and it can be difficult for her to follow the schedule all the timet times, and so she might at times find keeping to a schedule difficult.
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