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Testo da Maryama - English

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- My projet
- My name's Maryam ,i'm ivorian so i speak normaly in french and i want to learn in English because i would like going in London to study in business administration .
- My dream is of speaking in English to have more oppotunity in business word

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- My projet
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- My project
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- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Titolo
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- My name's Maryam ,i'm ivorian so i speak normaly in french and i want to learn in English because i would like going in London to study in business administration .
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- My name' is Maryam ,iI'm ivorian so ~~i speak normaly in french~~I'm a native french speaker and iI want to learn in English because iI would like ~~going in~~to go to London toand study in business administration .
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- My name's Maryam ,iand I'm iIvorian, so iI speak normally ~~in f~~French ~~and i~~. I want to learn in English; because iI would like ~~going in~~to go to London toand study in business administration .
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- My name's Maryam ,iand I'm iIvorian ~~so i speak~~. I normally ~~in f~~speak French ~~and i~~but I want to learn in English because iI would like ~~going in~~to go to London to study in business administration .
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- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1
Frase 2
- My dream is of speaking in English to have more oppotunity in business word
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- My dream is tof speak~~ing in~~ English tso I have ~~more~~bigger opportunityies in business world
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- My dream ~~is of speaking~~being fluent in English to have ~~more~~a better opportunity in business wordld.
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- My dream is ~~of speaking~~to be fluent in English in order to have ~~more~~better oppotunit~~y in~~ies in the business wordld. ¶¶(by the way, I'm okay with Lana06's sentence, it was "world" not "word" that's all)
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- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2

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