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Text from EvaGreen - English

 
  • Invitation 2

    • Dear Tom, I’m looking forward very much to your visit to our country this winter.
    • On that occasion, I invite you to New Year celebration on 31 December.
    • I’m glad if you accept the invitation and will stay as a guest in our house until the end of month or longer.
    • On the New Year party I'll introduce you to my family and friends.
    • Everyone's looking forward to you. Kiss, Kate.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English