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Text from carlos_gar5 - English

  • My plans for these vacations

    • first at all I want to apply for a job in a wonderfull company where the most majority of the employees are young like me and also this company treat their employees really good they give to them gifts,extra money and an excellent treatment. another thing that I would like to do is learning several thing like dance salsa, draw portraities,improve my English skills, get better in a game call Dofus however above all I would like to visit some places in my contry and meet people and if it is the case get a grilfriend.
    • I was forgetting to mention that I want to work this vacation because I want to save money to buy a motocicle

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • first at all I want to apply for a job in a wonderfull company where the most majority of the employees are young like me and also this company treat their employees really good they give to them gifts,extra money and an excellent treatment. another thing that I would like to do is learning several thing like dance salsa, draw portraities,improve my English skills, get better in a game call Dofus however above all I would like to visit some places in my contry and meet people and if it is the case get a grilfriend.
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    • fFirst at all , I want to apply for a job in a wonderfull company where the most majority of the employees are young like me , and also this company treats their employees really good the. The company give tos them gifts, extra money and an excellent treatment. aAnother thing that I would like to do is to learning several things like dance salsa, draw portraities, improve my English skills, and get better in a game called Dofus h. However, above all, I would like to visit some places in my country and meet people, and also if it is the case, get a grirlfriend.
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    • I was forgetting to mention that I want to work this vacation because I want to save money to buy a motocicle
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    • I was forgettingforgot to mention that I want to work this vacationholiday because I want to save money to buy a motocircycle
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