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Text from Maryam1987 - English

    • cultural traditions

  • Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.
  • Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions.
  • Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
    • Nowadays cultural tourist phenomena becoming pervade all around the world.
    • Some people think that this subject can damage social customs, on the other hand, a number of people believe that, if people use customs for attraction tourists they can preserve and spread their own traditions in the world.
    • Before presenting my own opinions, I tend to discuss both sides of this issue.
    • On the one hand, some people hold a view that cultural traditions will lose their original features if governments have commercial views about them.
    • They should not use for attraction tourists come from various countries for improving economical problems.
  • In addition, traditions should influence people's lives to forbid lose their originality and otherwise they become only symbolic subjects.
  • On the other hand, supporters of this idea believe that governments should protect customs by investing in this area, especially in developing countries.
  • Tourism is the backbone of some country's economy and this novel industry provides new jobs for native people so many people's livelihoods depend on tourism.
  • This industry not only spread various customs but also can introduce forgotten traditions.
  • For example; Middle East countries had a common background if they share their traditions they can understand each other so better and this event will help them to get close and finding appropriate solutions for their problems.
  • In my opinion, most countless countries belong to regions that have precious history and diverse tourist attractions, so to rescue and protect them they should be introduced by social media.
  • Moreover, the tourism industry is much more widespread all around the world and it can be helped people become familiar together and take enough knowledge about different nations.
  • To sum up, this industry is able positive impact on hotels, handicrafts, food, and transport in developing countries.
  • Therefore, the poverty problem can be figured out by providing novel jobs for youth.

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    • Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.
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    • Some people think that this subject can damage social customs, on the other hand, a number of people believe that, if people use customs for attraction tourists they can preserve and spread their own traditions in the world.
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    • Some people think that this subjectphenomenon can damage social customs, on the other hand, a number of people believe that, if people use customs for attraction tourists they can preserve and spread their own traditions in the world.
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    • On the one hand, some people hold a view that cultural traditions will lose their original features if governments have commercial views about them.
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    • On the one hand, some people hold a view that cultural traditions will lose their original features, if governments have commercial views about them.
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    • In addition, traditions should influence people's lives to forbid lose their originality and otherwise they become only symbolic subjects.
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    • On the other hand, supporters of this idea believe that governments should protect customs by investing in this area, especially in developing countries.
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    • Tourism is the backbone of some country's economy and this novel industry provides new jobs for native people so many people's livelihoods depend on tourism.
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    • For example; Middle East countries had a common background if they share their traditions they can understand each other so better and this event will help them to get close and finding appropriate solutions for their problems.
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    • In my opinion, most countless countries belong to regions that have precious history and diverse tourist attractions, so to rescue and protect them they should be introduced by social media.
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    • Moreover, the tourism industry is much more widespread all around the world and it can be helped people become familiar together and take enough knowledge about different nations.
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    • To sum up, this industry is able positive impact on hotels, handicrafts, food, and transport in developing countries.
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