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- Basketball
- I am a huge fan of basketball.
- In past I played it often although I don't have a big hight.
In team I was the point guard.
It is a very important position because the succes of entire crew depends on you.
My role was to start offensives and to make the space into the court.
It is also important to be able to do good and efficient passes.
- I practied this sport in school team.
- We once won the second place in a basketball tournament, and it was a especially pleasant moment.

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  I am a huge fan of basketball and have played it extensively in the past. I am not very tall and so I play the position of point guard for my team. Point guard is a very important position: Much of a team's success depends on the abilities of their point guard, whose role is to start offensives (i.e., "make plays"), and to create space on the court for better movement and ball action, i.e., effective and efficient ball handling and passing. ¶
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  I played basketball while at school. One season our team finished second in a basketball tournament. This was an especially pleasant time for us.
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