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  • What I want

    • In all years I lived, I always ask my self: what I want in my life?
  • Like more People, Many thing come to my mind as an answer to that question, but no one of it make me feel good.
  • In this year (now I am 30) when I make study of this topic, I read a book of the great Russian thinker Leo Tolstoy (A Confession) He write in it his long research about meaning of life, the final result he reached is this: every thing is this live is finite, so that no thing make us satisfied to consider it a reason to continue live our life, just thing who is infinite.
  • So, only The religion with it Categories: God, other life, could make meaning for our life.
  • May be you accept that conculodtion or not, for me it is make me satisfied.

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