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  • May 18th.

    • I really love my family, Today after class I arrived at home and my mom called me, and said to me: "baby, I bought your tickets airplanes, now you can visit me".
    • I really need go to visit my mom, always I try to buy souvenir and food from the region to her.
    • She stay with me in every moment in my life till I move from the city, but her never miss say me "have a nice nigth".

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    • I really love my family, Today after class I arrived at home and my mom called me, and said to me: "baby, I bought your tickets airplanes, now you can visit me".
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    • I really love my family,. Today after class, I arrived at home and my mom called me, and said to me:, "bBaby, I bought your plane tickets airplanes, n. Now you can visit me"."
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    • I reallydo love my family, Today, after class when I arrived at home and, my mom called me, and said to me: "“baby, Idon’t worry, I’ve already bought youair tickets airplanes, nowfor you, so you can visit me".
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  • 문장 2
    • I really need go to visit my mom, always I try to buy souvenir and food from the region to her.
      투표하세요!
    • I really need go to visit my mom, I always I try to buy souvenir and food from the region tolocal food to offer her.
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    • I really need go to visit my mom,. I always I try to buy souvenirs and food from the aregion toa where I live for her.
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    • She stay with me in every moment in my life till I move from the city, but her never miss say me "have a nice nigth".
      투표하세요!
    • She stayed with me in every moment in my life till I move from the city, but sher never miss sayed to tell me "have a nice nignth".
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    • She stay's been with me in every moment inof my life , untill I moved from the city,; but sher has never missed saying me, "hHave a nicegood nigtht".
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