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- I really love my family, Today after class I arrived at home and my mom called me, and said to me: "baby, I bought your tickets airplanes, now you can visit me".
- I really need go to visit my mom, always I try to buy souvenir and food from the region to her.
- She stay with me in every moment in my life till I move from the city, but her never miss say me "have a nice nigth".

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- I really love my family, Today after class I arrived at home and my mom called me, and said to me: "baby, I bought your tickets airplanes, now you can visit me".
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- I really love my family,. Today after class, I arrived at home and my mom called me, and said ~~to me:~~, "bBaby, I bought your plane tickets ~~airplanes, n~~. Now you can visit me"."
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- I ~~really~~do love my family, Today, after class when I arrived at home ~~and~~, my mom called me, and said ~~to me~~: "“baby, Idon’t worry, I’ve already bought ~~you~~air tickets ~~airplanes, now~~for you, so you can visit me".
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- I really need go to visit my mom, always I try to buy souvenir and food from the region to her.
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- I really need go to visit my mom, I always I try to buy souvenir and ~~food from the region to~~local food to offer her.
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- I really need go to visit my mom,. I always I try to buy souvenirs and food from the are~~gion to~~a where I live for her.
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- She stay with me in every moment in my life till I move from the city, but her never miss say me "have a nice nigth".
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- She stayed with me in every moment in my life till I move from the city, but sher never miss ~~say~~ed to tell me "have a nice nignth".
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- She ~~stay~~'s been with me in every moment inof my life , untill I moved from the city,; but sher has never missed saying me, "hHave a ~~nice~~good nigtht".
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