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• Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.

• Today a number of people believe that when persons go to the other country they will meet diverse strange cultures and traditions, therefore, they must understand and accept them.

• However, in my opinion, this process is normal and ordinary but I never agree with this subject we force to forget our cultures and national identity and we have to accept foreign culture.

• The first group of people believes that when someone goes to the novel place, they should accept and adapt in the new situation because humans are a social creature and they are not able to live alone so they require learning new local customs and getting fresh experiences.

• They will be comfortable if they are selected to conform them self to the novel condition.

• Although an individual should be appreciative and respect of the recent country traditions they visit or decide to live, they should not be compelled to give up their own customs.

• They are also freedom to choose a suitable lifestyle for themselves.

• In some countries, different cultures live in the peace and they do not discomfit to each other because they know these differents help them to understand each other and they can improve their personalities and make them wise and cultural.

• In conclusion, I disagree with this issue for adapting in the new community we must forget our own custom because it is our forefather heritage and adapting just an option to improve our self not obligation to forget our customs.

• Human society needs different cultures to live together in a peaceful situation. because in the verity community different talents can grow and people do not have xenophobia to other people with different ideas and lifestyles.