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Văn bản từ AntonioFisk - English

  • REFERENCE LETTER

    • To whom it may concern, I confirm that I have known Mr. Antonio Maria Fiscarelli since 2010 when he began his Bachelor Degree study in Computer Science and Automation Engineering at Polytechnic of Bari university.
    • During the program, I taught him in two different courses, Informatics and Image Processing and Computer Vision, and directed his thesis.
  • Mr. Fiscarelli reliably and punctually completed his work with insight and skill, and worked well in projects both with other students and independently.
  • In the seminar works that he completed for me, and in his thesis, he demonstrated superior research skills, both with Italian and English papers, as well as his attitude to deal with real situations.
    • During my courses, students were in fact required to attend a project work, that included developing an application and writing the relative documentation in English.
    • During his thesis, he worked close to my research group and gave our research projects an important contribution thanks to his analytical skills.
    • He also was a speaker at the seminary “Human-machine and human-robot interaction”, talking about his thesis and some of the projects which we were involved with.
    • He is now attending his Master degree in Artificial Intelligence at Polytechnic of Milan university and his graduation will be in 2015.
    • I recommend him to you highly without hesitation or reservation.
  • Should you wish to discuss his application further, feel free to contact me.
  • Faithfully, Prof. VitoAntonio Bevilacqua Polytechinc of Bari

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    • To whom it may concern, I confirm that I have known Mr. Antonio Maria Fiscarelli since 2010 when he began his Bachelor Degree study in Computer Science and Automation Engineering at Polytechnic of Bari university.
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    • To whom it may concern,:¶¶I confirm that I have known Mr. Antonio Maria Fiscarelli since 2010 when he began his Bachelor Degree study in Computer Science and Automation Engineering at the Polytechnic of Bari uUniversity.
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  • câu 2
    • During the program, I taught him in two different courses, Informatics and Image Processing and Computer Vision, and directed his thesis.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • During the program, I taught him in two different courses, Informatics and Image Processing and Computer Vision, and directsupervised his thesis.
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    • Mr. Fiscarelli reliably and punctually completed his work with insight and skill, and worked well in projects both with other students and independently.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • In the seminar works that he completed for me, and in his thesis, he demonstrated superior research skills, both with Italian and English papers, as well as his attitude to deal with real situations.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • During my courses, students were in fact required to attend a project work, that included developing an application and writing the relative documentation in English.
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    • During my courses, students were in facthave actually been required to attend a project work, thatwhich included developing an application and writing thecompiling relative documentation in English.
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    • During his thesis, he worked close to my research group and gave our research projects an important contribution thanks to his analytical skills.
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    • DurWhile working on his thesis, he worked close toclosely cooperated with my research group and gavecontributed to our research projects an important contribution thanks towith his analytical skills.
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    • He also was a speaker at the seminary “Human-machine and human-robot interaction”, talking about his thesis and some of the projects which we were involved with.
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    • He also was a speaker at the seminary “Human-machine and hHuman-rRobot interaction”, talking about his thesis and some of the projects which we were involved with.
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    • He is now attending his Master degree in Artificial Intelligence at Polytechnic of Milan university and his graduation will be in 2015.
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    • He is now attending his Master dDegree in Artificial Intelligence at the Polytechnic of Milan uUniversity and his graduation will be in 2015.
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