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  • An urgent referral letter

    • I am writing to refer Ms Styles, to request an urgent assessment and further management for her recently diagnosed pericarditis.
    • Regarding Ms Styles social and medical history, she lives alone.
    • She has had hypertension and diabetes mellitus since 2012 and 2009 respectively.
  • She has been taking medications such as carpinol, metformin and glipizide.
    • She has been exhibiting symptoms of depression over the last 3 years.
    • Ms Styles was admitted to the green valley hospital on 07/04/2018 with the complaints of shortness of breath and tiredness.
    • During hospitalization her lab results were erythrocyte sedimentation rate 24, creatinine-2.0 and decreased platelets.
    • Type B influenza was noticed in her throat swab and her echocardiogram report revealed type B influenza plus pericarditis.
    • She was treated with antibiotics.
    • She was discharged on 09/04/2018 and advised further follow up home visits.
    • On 14/04/2019, when I visited Ms Styles at her home she explained she was on self-care after her discharge.
    • During examination, she complained chest pain, tiredness and fatigue.
    • Her vitals were heart rate-122, respiratory rate-22, blood pressure was -180/90 and she has mild temperature.
    • However, her chest pain was declined while sitting.
    • Her clinical signs and symptoms are suggestive of pericarditis.

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