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  • Cover letter

  • I am writing in response to an advertisement on the official site of White&Case for a trainee position (summer trainee program).
  • I am a fourth-year student of Lomonosov Moscow State University; my average grade is A (5.00).
  • The main reason why I would like to apply for the summer program is that I want to get an opportunity to work for 2 months with highly qualified and professional lawyers about whom I hear very often on my classes and who became my role models in a career.
    • Since the first year of university, the idea of internship in White&Case seemed me very tempting but challenging.
    • In my understanding, hard knowledge of the law and fluent English it is not enough to be a perfect White&Case intern.
    • There are should be some qualities indicating a good lawyer such as passion in the future profession, high motivation, ability to overcome deadline stress and deal with people (from clients to colleagues).
  • Without false modesty, I can say that I tried to develop my hard skills but never forget about soft skills either.
  • That's why I think it is a perfect time to demonstrate them in practice.
  • Another reason for applying for the summer program is that I want to get with real client projects.
  • In university, you study on theoretical models and tasks from the textbook.
  • These tasks can be really complicated, but they do not reflect the challenges of real jurisprudence.
  • In order to be a competitive lawyer, you need to be as savvy at theoretical conceptions as practically oriented.
  • My current professional interests center around civil law, international commercial arbitration, and civil procedure.
  • That's why I would like to try my hand at practices of International Arbitration and International Trade.
  • I feel that I could be a valuable asset to the White&Case team, and I bring all of the skills to the table that you require in a trainee.
  • For further evidence of my qualifications for this position, please review the enclosed résumé.

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    • I am writing in response to an advertisement on the official site of White&Case for a trainee position (summer trainee program).
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    • The main reason why I would like to apply for the summer program is that I want to get an opportunity to work for 2 months with highly qualified and professional lawyers about whom I hear very often on my classes and who became my role models in a career.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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    • Since the first year of university, the idea of internship in White&Case seemed me very tempting but challenging.
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    • Since the first year of university, tThe idea of internship in White&Case seemed me very tempting butand challenging for me since the first year of my study in the university.
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      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 4
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    • In my understanding, hard knowledge of the law and fluent English it is not enough to be a perfect White&Case intern.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • IOn my understanding, haropinion solid knowledge of the law and fluent English it isare not enough to be a perfect White&Case intern.
      julia_vasejulia_vase profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
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    • There are should be some qualities indicating a good lawyer such as passion in the future profession, high motivation, ability to overcome deadline stress and deal with people (from clients to colleagues).
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    • There are should be some qualities indicatdefining a good lawyer such as passion infor the future profession, high motivation, ability to overcomdeal with the deadline stpressure and dealwork with people (from clients to colleagues).
      julia_vasejulia_vase profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6
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    • Without false modesty, I can say that I tried to develop my hard skills but never forget about soft skills either.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
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    • In order to be a competitive lawyer, you need to be as savvy at theoretical conceptions as practically oriented.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12
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    • My current professional interests center around civil law, international commercial arbitration, and civil procedure.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • I feel that I could be a valuable asset to the White&Case team, and I bring all of the skills to the table that you require in a trainee.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 15PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 15
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