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Evaluation report
- Introduction of the evaluation report The purpose of this report is to evaluate Harold Heymans’ presentation on artificial intelligence in the hedging business.
- In this tekst I will give an enumeration of the strenghts as well as some points of criticism where Harold can improve.
- And finally, I will conclude with an overall evaluation of the mentioned presentation.
- Strengths of the presentation First of all, I’m going to reflect on the strengths of his presentation.
- Harold was very well prepared and made a clear and good structured Powerpoint presentation.
- Also the graph that he used was very obvious.
- He started off by introducing himself and clearly describing the situation.
- The public could keep its attention to the presentation due to the fact that he was talking loudly and not too fast.
- A strong point of his presentation was that he came across very confidentially due to his attitude.
- He used a lot his hands and arms during his presentation to clarify his point.
- He was trying to make eye contact with the audience.
- It was also remarkable how well Harold interacted with the audience during his presentation by asking us some rhetorical questions.
- At the end of the presentation it was good that he gave us the opportunity to ask some questions.
- During the presentation, I could not hear any grammar mistake.
- Points of criticism That brings me to the next step, a selection of my points of criticism of his presentation.
- I think that he was stressed, so he did not stand still always.
- I think that this is a point for him where he can work on.
- At the moment of showing the graph Harold did not mention what the axis of his graph was representing.
- It might have been a good idea to clearly define the x-axis and the y-axis before explaining the graph.
- This could possibly make it easier for the audience to understand the graph and it will help him with the explanation of the graph.
- For further presentations, I would suggest him to not try to perfectly rattle off his text.
- He must try to tell a story but he was so well prepared that sometimes he got lost in trying to perfectly say his text rather than trying to convince me of his point of view.
- Conclusion of the evaluation report In conclusion, Harold did a great job and it was nice to listen to him.
- It was clear that he spent a lot of time preparing the presentation.
- The result was a well-structured and interactive presentation.
- For future presentations, I suggest him to not try to rattle of his text and to stand still, even if he is nervous, because it will come over as more natural.
- LeukeMarch 2019100% GOOD (1 votes)
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