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  • Personal statement - Part 2

  • When I discovered the Joint International Master Program, I found it very interesting since the beginning.
  • Among many reasons, certainly the wide variety of courses offered by the different universities allow the student to create a path tailored on your needs.
  • As far as I’m concerned, I’ve chosen the university of Graz as host university 1 while Leipzig as the one where to attend the specialization track named “Resources Management”.
  • The university of Graz offered a wide range of exams during the first semester, which help the student have a global comprehension of Sustainability field, as well as put theory concept of Sustainable development into practice.
  • In addition, and that is one of the parts I prefer the most, during this first period, it is possible to choose elective courses, based on the student’s need and interests.
  • As concerns mine, I’ve always found interesting Ethics, which has been the main subject of my Bachelor final paper.
  • Having the opportunity to study “Climate Ethics” as an elective course, motivated me more.
  • On the other hand, I’ve chosen the specialization track in “Resource Management” because it can be very useful for my future career project.
  • In fact, I’d like to work in municipalities or in local NGOs.
  • Cities can be a starting point for raising citizens awareness for sustainable development: if people have effective sustainable alternatives available, they will start using hem being themselves promoters of a lifestyle that can make a difference.
  • In addition, I am particularly attracted in learning about management, because I think it allows to put into practice the knowledge learnt during the first semester.
  • Even tough I have never studied this subject before, I am not scared about challenges.
  • I am aware that I need to overcome the obstacles to improve my skills.
  • I am an ambitious woman who wants to learn as much as possible from the experiences.
  • Furthermore, If I have a goal, I know that I need t work hard to achieve it.
  • As an example, the first year of my university career, I attended another faculty.
  • At the end of that year, knowing the consequences of my choice, I decided to change field of study t focus my attention on the international relations.
  • At the same time, I did not want to “loose” an academic year, so I made a promise: I would have graduated in three years anyway.
  • So I did: from the first year of my new university faculty I took several exams in advance, making also some sacrifices.
  • Despite all the difficulties I accomplished my goal and graduated on November 2018 with the highest mark.

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    • Among many reasons, certainly the wide variety of courses offered by the different universities allow the student to create a path tailored on your needs.
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    • As far as I’m concerned, I’ve chosen the university of Graz as host university 1 while Leipzig as the one where to attend the specialization track named “Resources Management”.
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    • The university of Graz offered a wide range of exams during the first semester, which help the student have a global comprehension of Sustainability field, as well as put theory concept of Sustainable development into practice.
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    • In addition, and that is one of the parts I prefer the most, during this first period, it is possible to choose elective courses, based on the student’s need and interests.
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    • On the other hand, I’ve chosen the specialization track in “Resource Management” because it can be very useful for my future career project.
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    • Cities can be a starting point for raising citizens awareness for sustainable development: if people have effective sustainable alternatives available, they will start using hem being themselves promoters of a lifestyle that can make a difference.
      Glasajte sada!
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    • In addition, I am particularly attracted in learning about management, because I think it allows to put into practice the knowledge learnt during the first semester.
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    • At the end of that year, knowing the consequences of my choice, I decided to change field of study t focus my attention on the international relations.
      Glasajte sada!
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    • At the same time, I did not want to “loose” an academic year, so I made a promise: I would have graduated in three years anyway.
      Glasajte sada!
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