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    • My Experience for an Intern Application

    • At my sophomore, I got the first informal short-time intern at Industrial and Commercial Bank of China ( ICBC ), XXXX Sub-branch.
    • During that busy four weeks, I assisted the credit manager with home interview and telephone survey over 50 clients and helped clients fill out personal information forms.
    • This experience leaded me into the professional world and made me more detail-oriented.
    • After passing the French Language test and the academic evaluation, nervously and expectedly, I came to the land of the beautiful country – France, where I amassed many unforgettable friendships and crazy traveling experiences.
    • Moreover, our ProAct team organized a successful neighborhood festival for students in Bordeaux as well as introduced Chinese traditional culture to them.
    • At the same time, another school training Corporate Mission gave me access to connect a local company, XXXX.
    • Under the guidance of a professional coach and the director of this company, our team evaluated the company’s previous marketing performance, described potential customer profile, compared several suitable online platforms and drafted 2018 marketing budget.
    • Clearly, it is not facile to achieve tasks, such as dietary restrictions, linguistic politeness and disagreements among the group members; however, the problems I met prompted me to work to the fullest of my potential to understand the culture diversity and to improve my communication skill.
    • In a nutshell, I believe that my personal traits and the professional attitude I showed by these achievements and operational experience have made me prepared well for this position.

KÉRLEK, SEGÍTS KIJAVÍTANI MINDEN MONDATOT! - English

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  • Mondat 1
    • At my sophomore, I got the first informal short-time intern at Industrial and Commercial Bank of China ( ICBC ), XXXX Sub-branch.
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    • AtDuring my sophomore, I got the year, I did my first informal short-time internship at Industrial and Commercial Bank of China ( ICBC ), XXXX Sub-branch.
    • AtDuring my sophomore, I got the first informal year at university, I received an appointment as a short-time intern at the Industrial and Commercial Bank of China ( ICBC ), XXXX Sub-branch.
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 1ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 1
  • Mondat 2
    • During that busy four weeks, I assisted the credit manager with home interview and telephone survey over 50 clients and helped clients fill out personal information forms.
      Szavazz most!
    • During thatose busy four weeks, I assisted the credit manager with home interviews and telephone surveys of over 50 clients and helped clients to fill outin personal information forms.
    • During thata busy four -weeks period, I assisted the credit manager withconduct home interviews and telephone survey overs with more than 50 clients and helped clients fill out personal information forms.
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 2ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 2
  • Mondat 3
  • Mondat 4
    • After passing the French Language test and the academic evaluation, nervously and expectedly, I came to the land of the beautiful country – France, where I amassed many unforgettable friendships and crazy traveling experiences.
      Szavazz most!
    • After passing the French Language test and the academic evaluation, nervously and expectedly, I came to the land of the beautiful country – France, where I amassforged many unforgettable friendships and crazyaccumulated memorable traveling experiences.
    • After passing the French Language testexam and the academic evaluation, I arrived, nervously and expectedntly, I came to the land of the beautiful country of France, where I amassestablished many unforgettable friendships and crazy traveling experiences.
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 4ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 4
  • Mondat 5
    • Moreover, our ProAct team organized a successful neighborhood festival for students in Bordeaux as well as introduced Chinese traditional culture to them.
      Szavazz most!
    • MoreoverWhat's more, our ProAct team organized a successful neighborhood festival for students in the region of Bordeaux as well asnd introduced Chinesethem to traditional culture to themChinese culture.
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 5ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 5
  • Mondat 6
    • At the same time, another school training Corporate Mission gave me access to connect a local company, XXXX.
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    • At the same time, another school training Corporate Mission gave me access to connect with a local company, XXXX.
    • At the same time, another school training Corporate Mission gave me access to connect a local company, XXXX.

      (note: I really cannot fathom the deeper "meaning" of this sentence, @ least not sufficiently to assist in editing it, which it obviously (still) needs)
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 6ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 6
  • Mondat 7
    • Under the guidance of a professional coach and the director of this company, our team evaluated the company’s previous marketing performance, described potential customer profile, compared several suitable online platforms and drafted 2018 marketing budget.
      Szavazz most!
    • Under the guidance of a professional coach and the director of this company, our team evaluated the company’s previous marketing performance, described potential customer profile, compared several suitable online platforms and drafted the 2018 marketing budget.
    • Under the guidance of a professional coach and the director of this company, our team evaluated the company’s previous marketing performance, describedfined the potential profiles of its customer profilbase, compared several suitable online platforms, and drafted its 2018 marketing budget.
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 7ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 7
  • Mondat 8
    • Clearly, it is not facile to achieve tasks, such as dietary restrictions, linguistic politeness and disagreements among the group members; however, the problems I met prompted me to work to the fullest of my potential to understand the culture diversity and to improve my communication skill.
      Szavazz most!
    • Clearly, it is not facile to achieve tasks, suchgood relationships are not facilitated by such elements as dietary restrictions, linguistic impoliteness and, nor disagreements among the group members; however, the problems I metencounterd prompted me to work to the fullest of my potential to understandappreciate the cultureal diversityfferences and to improve my communication skills.
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 8ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 8
  • Mondat 9
    • In a nutshell, I believe that my personal traits and the professional attitude I showed by these achievements and operational experience have made me prepared well for this position.
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    • In a nutshell, I believe that my personal traits and the professional attitude I showed by thesedemonstarted through my achievements and operational experience have maprovided me prepared wellwith excellent preparation for this position. ¶
    • ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 9ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 9