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    • IELTS Writing task 1

  • The bar graph shows the distribution of male and female teachers in six different kinds of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.
    • In the six education settings, women teachers outnumbered men in the first three ones (nursery pre-school; primaru school and secondary school).
    • In particular, there is a wide gap in the schools where children and babies go.
    • As concerns the nursery, men teachers are 5% while women are 95%; the same gap is illustrated in primary school, where men represent 8% of the teachers and women 92%.
    • The only institution where there's an equal distribution of men and women teachers are in the college.
    • By contrast, men teachers outnumbered women in private training institute (men represent 58% of the teachers while women 42%) and in university, where women professors are less than 40%.
    • Overall, women teachers tend to work in schools for young students.
    • On the other hand, men teachers prefer giving lessons to teenagers and adults.

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    • The bar graph shows the distribution of male and female teachers in six different kinds of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.
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    • In the six education settings, women teachers outnumbered men in the first three ones (nursery pre-school; primaru school and secondary school).
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    • In the six education settings, women teachers outnumbered men in the first three ones (nursery pre-school; primaruy school and secondary school).
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    • InAt the six educational settings, women teachers outnumbered men in the first three ones (female outnumbered male teachers in the lower levels, i.e., nursery pre-school;, primaruy (i.e., elementary) school, and secondary school).
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    • As concerns the nursery, men teachers are 5% while women are 95%; the same gap is illustrated in primary school, where men represent 8% of the teachers and women 92%.
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    • As concernsfor the nursery, men teachers are 5% while women are 95%; the same gap is illustrated in primary school, where men represent 8% of the teachers and women 92%.
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    • As concerns the nursery, men teachers are 5% while women are 95%; the same gap is illustrated inIn the case of the nursery school level, 95% of teachers are female and 5% are male, a "gap" that is similar at the primary school level, where men represent 892% of the teachers and women 92%re female and 8% are male.
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    • The only institution where there's an equal distribution of men and women teachers are in the college.
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    • The only institution where there' is an equal distribution of men and women teachers are in the college.
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    • The only institution where there's an equal distribution of men and women teachers are in the collegeCollege is the only educational level at which the distribution of female and male instructors is equal.
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    • By contrast, men teachers outnumbered women in private training institute (men represent 58% of the teachers while women 42%) and in university, where women professors are less than 40%.
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    • By contrast, men teacheale instructors outnumbered women in private training institutes, where (men recompreisentd 58% of the teachers while women 42%)and women 42% of instructors, and in universityies, where women professors are less than 40%comprised fewer than 40% of all instructors.
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