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    • IELTS Writing task 1

  • The bar graph shows the distribution of male and female teachers in six different kinds of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.
    • In the six education settings, women teachers outnumbered men in the first three ones (nursery pre-school; primaru school and secondary school).
    • In particular, there is a wide gap in the schools where children and babies go.
    • As concerns the nursery, men teachers are 5% while women are 95%; the same gap is illustrated in primary school, where men represent 8% of the teachers and women 92%.
    • The only institution where there's an equal distribution of men and women teachers are in the college.
    • By contrast, men teachers outnumbered women in private training institute (men represent 58% of the teachers while women 42%) and in university, where women professors are less than 40%.
    • Overall, women teachers tend to work in schools for young students.
    • On the other hand, men teachers prefer giving lessons to teenagers and adults.

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