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  • Travelling alone

    • When you decide where to go on holiday, the first thing you think is “Who am I going with?” So, you plan the trip trying to satisfy everyone’s requests, sometimes putting aside what you’d really like to do or see.
  • This week I was supposed to travel with another girl, who cancelled her booking at the last moment.
    • At the beginning, I just panicked, starting figuring out the problem, trying to involve other people to come to Scotland with me.
  • But then, I realized that I was old and mature enough to travel alone.
    • Therefore, I packed my stuffs and flew to Edinburgh, stayed a couple of night in that fascinating city and then continue towards the northern part of Scotland.
  • Thanks to a tour, I met other girls, many of which had been travelled alone around the world for months.
  • Moral of the story?
  • If you want to visit a city, a country or wherever you want to go, just GO without waiting for anyone.
    • If I had cancelled my trip, I’ve would never seen those breath-taking landscapes or met such loving people.
  • And furthermore, Scotland is the best destination to travel alone: it makes you think about yourself, your deepest needs, it helps your heart reconnect to your soul.
  • We want to be surrounded by the people to feel happier.
    • But sometimes we don’t realize that alone we’re enough.

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    • When you decide where to go on holiday, the first thing you think is “Who am I going with?” So, you plan the trip trying to satisfy everyone’s requests, sometimes putting aside what you’d really like to do or see.
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    • When you decide where to go on holiday, the first thing you think is “Who am I going with?” So, you plan the trip trying to satisfy everyone’s requestsbody, sometimes putting aside what you’d really like to do or see.
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    • At the beginning, I just panicked, starting figuring out the problem, trying to involve other people to come to Scotland with me.
      투표하세요!
    • At the beginning, I just panicked, starting to figuringe out the problem, then trying to involvconvince other people to come to Scotland with me.
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    • Therefore, I packed my stuffs and flew to Edinburgh, stayed a couple of night in that fascinating city and then continue towards the northern part of Scotland.
      투표하세요!
    • Therefore, I packed my stuffs and flew to Edinburgh, stayed a couple of night in that fascinating city and then continued towards the northern part of Scotland.
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    • If I had cancelled my trip, I’ve would never seen those breath-taking landscapes or met such loving people.
      투표하세요!
    • If I hadHad I cancelled my trip, I’ve would've never seen those breath-taking landscapes nor met such lovingely people.
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    • And furthermore, Scotland is the best destination to travel alone: it makes you think about yourself, your deepest needs, it helps your heart reconnect to your soul.
      투표하세요!
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