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  • Why are you interested in working with us?

  • The reason is very simple - I like your goals and your application.
    • Some years ago I had a very serious disease and had to take extremely strong medicines during 6 months to manage this problem.
    • In addition to that I was lucky and my story had a very happy and, but I knew and saw many tragic stories.
    • Therefore I clearly understand how difficult it is, to live with problems with health and now I am seeking for a special job opportunity, which helps me to make my dream comes true - help people in their struggling with diseases.
  • I am not a doctor, but I am software developer and believe that one day I will have such kind a job.
    • Besides that I would like to live in Europe, I have already been to many european countries and have a sufficient impression of living there.

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    • Some years ago I had a very serious disease and had to take extremely strong medicines during 6 months to manage this problem.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Some years ago I had a very serious diseaseillness and had to take extremely strong medicines duringations for 6 months to manage this problem.
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    • In addition to that I was lucky and my story had a very happy and, but I knew and saw many tragic stories.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition to that, I was lucky and my story had a very happy aending, but I knew and sawheard many tragic stories.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • câu 4
    • Therefore I clearly understand how difficult it is, to live with problems with health and now I am seeking for a special job opportunity, which helps me to make my dream comes true - help people in their struggling with diseases.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Therefore I clearly understand how difficult it is, to live with health problems with health and now I am seeking for a special job opportunity, which that helps me to make my dream comes true -, which is to help people inwith their struggling with diseaseses against illnesses, come true.
      MwayneMwayne profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • Besides that I would like to live in Europe, I have already been to many european countries and have a sufficient impression of living there.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Besides that, I would like to live in Europe,. I have already been to many eEuropean countries and have a sufficient impression of livingthe life there.
      MwayneMwayne profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6