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    • I am writing this recommendation letter to express my support for Amy and their application for the Master Art.
    • I have had the pleasure of teaching her in my lessons to prepare for European Fine Arts School at Turkey university continuing education center for culture and art the past one years in 2017.
    • During that time, I have come to know her as a strong student and a role model for her peers.
    • Amy is a rare type of student who combines exceptional natural ability with a willingness and eagerness to learn.
  • Amy is very mature, and she approaches her art with an astute sense of objectivity.
  • She processes constructive criticism well and is always willing to go the extra mile in order to take her work to the highest level of formal and conceptual refinement.
    • I have experienced an individual who shows up earlier than asked, works hard, and carries themselves in a polite, respectable manner.
    • In addition, she is exceptionally gifted at making others feel comfortable and always maintaining a positive attitude.
    • It is without reservation that I recommend Amy as a candidate for this admission.
    • If you would like to discus her attributes in more detail, please feel free to contact me by the following e-mail address. Sincerely,

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  • câu 1
    • I am writing this recommendation letter to express my support for Amy and their application for the Master Art.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I am writing this recommendation letter to express my support for Amy and their application for the Master of Art.
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  • câu 2
    • I have had the pleasure of teaching her in my lessons to prepare for European Fine Arts School at Turkey university continuing education center for culture and art the past one years in 2017.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have had the pleasure of teaching her in my lessons to prepare for European Fine Arts School at Turkey university continuing education center for culture and art for the past one years in 2017.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • câu 3
    • During that time, I have come to know her as a strong student and a role model for her peers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • During that time, I have come to know her as a strongFrom that experience, I discovered that she is a diligent student and a good role model for her peers.
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  • câu 4
    • Amy is a rare type of student who combines exceptional natural ability with a willingness and eagerness to learn.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Amy is a rare type of student who combines her exceptional natural ability with a willingness and eagernessgreat enthusiasm to learn.
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    • She processes constructive criticism well and is always willing to go the extra mile in order to take her work to the highest level of formal and conceptual refinement.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 7
    • I have experienced an individual who shows up earlier than asked, works hard, and carries themselves in a polite, respectable manner.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have experienced an individual who shows up earlier than asked, works hard, and carries themrselvesf in a polite, and respectable manner.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I have experienced an individual who shows up earlier than asked, works hard, and carries themselves in a polite, respectable mannerShe is very punctual, hard working, polite, and remarkably charismatic.
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  • câu 8
    • In addition, she is exceptionally gifted at making others feel comfortable and always maintaining a positive attitude.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition, she is exceptionally gifted at making others feel comfortable and always maintainings a positive attitude.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • If you would like to discus her attributes in more detail, please feel free to contact me by the following e-mail address. Sincerely,
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • If you would like to discuss her attributes in more detail, please feel free to contact me by the following e-mail address. Sincerely,
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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