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  • In the age of computers and the internet, is there still...

  • In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries?
    • I think there should be hardcopy books and other documents and libraries, as well.
    • Although reading or searching books or documents from screen can be easier then that of hardcopy books, computers breakdown easily.
    • Nowadays, servers and computers are strong but they need electricity, so if the electricity cut off, they are on danger and all the information they include.
    • Sometimes, there are dangerous attacks on the internet and this attacks cause information losses.
    • Besides, sensing of the old books feel people an interesting experience.
    • Moreover, people study in the libraries with a discipline.
    • Additionally, libraries are very silent places and you can study and think properly in that places.
  • You can borrow books and documents freely, especially in University libraries.
    • On the internet, you have to be a member to access books and documents.

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    • Although reading or searching books or documents from screen can be easier then that of hardcopy books, computers breakdown easily.
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    • Although reading or searching books or documents fromon the screen can be easier thean that of hard copy books, computers break down easily.
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    • Nowadays, servers and computers are strong but they need electricity, so if the electricity cut off, they are on danger and all the information they include.
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    • Nowadays, servers and computers are strong but they need electricity, so if the electricity is cut off, they are on danger and all the information they includeall the information stored within them are in danger.
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    • Nowadays,Although recent servers and computers are strong but, they need electricity, so if the. Therefore in cases of electricity cut offfailure, they are oin danger and all the information they includethey face the risk of loosing vital information.
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    • Sometimes, there are dangerous attacks on the internet and this attacks cause information losses.
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    • Sometimes, there are dangerous attacks on the internet and thisese attacks cause loss of information losses.
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    • Additionally, libraries are very silent places and you can study and think properly in that places.
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    • Additionally, libraries are very silent places and you can study and think properly in thatose places.
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