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  • In the age of computers and the internet, is there still...

  • In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries?
    • I think there should be hardcopy books and other documents and libraries, as well.
    • Although reading or searching books or documents from screen can be easier then that of hardcopy books, computers breakdown easily.
    • Nowadays, servers and computers are strong but they need electricity, so if the electricity cut off, they are on danger and all the information they include.
    • Sometimes, there are dangerous attacks on the internet and this attacks cause information losses.
    • Besides, sensing of the old books feel people an interesting experience.
    • Moreover, people study in the libraries with a discipline.
    • Additionally, libraries are very silent places and you can study and think properly in that places.
  • You can borrow books and documents freely, especially in University libraries.
    • On the internet, you have to be a member to access books and documents.

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