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- Today, I've read books who name "The old who don't want celebrate his birthday" and "Phosphore".
- I try to learn lot of things, for have a good culture for my future school years.
- Maybe, in librairy there are a easy english books ?!

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- Hi !
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
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- Today, I've read books who name "The old who don't want celebrate his birthday" and "Phosphore".
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- Today, I've read books ~~who name~~titled "The oOld wWho dDon't wWant cCelebrate hHis bBirthday" and "Phosphore".
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- Today, I've read books ~~who name~~that are entitled, "The oOld ~~who do~~Man Who Doesn't wWant cto Celebrate hHis bBirthday" and the "Phosphore"."¶
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- I try to learn lot of things, for have a good culture for my future school years.
  Undi sekarang!
- I try to learn a lot of things~~, for have a good~~ because I want to be well cultured for my future school years.
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- Maybe, in librairy there are a easy english books ?!
  Undi sekarang!
- Maybe, in a librairy there are a easy eEnglish books ?!
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- Maybe, in the librairy, there are ~~a easy e~~less complicated English books ?!
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3