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Tekst fra Jemismara - English

    • My life

    • When he was still alive my dad often gave me hugs and kisses on his daily basis, he always fulfill everything that i want (even though he's run out of money but he tried his best to give it all to me).
    • Talking about my mom, she did the same way with my dad (but sometimes she yelled at me when she mad).
    • My brothers and sisters, the way they acted through me on their daily basis made me realize as the youngest child in our family, i deserved to get more, to treat me differently from others because i deserve it.
    • Growing up with those kind of "the love that I've received from my family" has shaped my attitude become like this; stubborn, spoiled, throwing stuffs if it didn't work with my own way, and often lose control.
    • But also, they don't forget to teach me how to love others unconditionally, to be faithful, to be strong when everything's not easy.

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

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    • When he was still alive my dad often gave me hugs and kisses on his daily basis, he always fulfill everything that i want (even though he's run out of money but he tried his best to give it all to me).
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    • Wwhen he was still alive my dad often gave me hugs and kisses on hisa daily basis, he always fulfill everything that i want (ed my needs( even though he' was run out of money but, he tried his best to give it all to me).
    • When he was still alive my dad often gave me hugs and kisses on his daily basis, he always fulfill everything that i want (even though he's run out of money but he tried his best to give it all to me).
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
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    • My brothers and sisters, the way they acted through me on their daily basis made me realize as the youngest child in our family, i deserved to get more, to treat me differently from others because i deserve it.
      Stem nå!
    • My brothers and sisters, the way they acted through me on their daily basis made me realize as the youngest child in our family, i deserved to get more, to treat me differently from others because i deserve it..
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3
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    • Growing up with those kind of "the love that I've received from my family" has shaped my attitude become like this; stubborn, spoiled, throwing stuffs if it didn't work with my own way, and often lose control.
      Stem nå!
    • Growing up with those kind of "the love that I've received from my family" has shaped my attitude become like this; stubborn, spoiled, throwing stuffs if it didn't work with my own way, and often lose control..
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4
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