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- Presentationnnn!
- Hi, my name is Clara, I'm 17 and I live in Bordeaux.
- I went to England in 2010 and I loved, more specially Brighton!
- Now, I'd like to meet people to improve my english, spanish and also to learn italian!
- I can teach french too! byeee! :)

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- Hi, my name is Clara, I'm 17 and I live in Bordeaux.
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- Hi, my name is Clara,. I'm 17 and I live in Bordeaux.
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- Hi, my name is Clara,. I'm 17 years old and I live in Bordeaux.
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- Hi, my name is Clara,. I'm 17 and I live in Bordeaux.
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- I went to England in 2010 and I loved, more specially Brighton!
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- I went to England in 2010 and I loved~~, more~~ it, especially Brighton!
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- Now, I'd like to meet people to improve my english, spanish and also to learn italian!
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- Now, I'd like to meet people to improve my eEnglish~~, s~~ and my Spanish and also to learn iItalian!.
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- I can teach french too! byeee! :)
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- I can teach fFrench ~~too! byee~~. Bye! :)
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