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  • Since I finished my master degree, I have started working at Boston scientific for one year? during that year I have been in charge of three main projects.
  • The first one I lead concerned The launch and the roll out of a new product for the cardio rythm department.
  • Then I manage the creation of a key opinions leaders database, the aim of that project was to facilitate the search of KOL who match the best to be the main speaker during a symposia or a medical congress.
  • The last one, was the development of an e-learning tool, in order to educate patient about their heart disease.
  • After that great experience, i joined a consulting firm, which is currently the firm I work for.
  • The first mission was for AXA, as business analyst to support and help the financial departement.
  • I worked on the creation of dashboards ans KPI.
  • Once that mission completed, boston call me back to work with them on an other project.
  • This job teach me how to be really flexible and efficient, I am able to understand really quickly the business of different area and I am really rigourous.
  • last week I post ma résumé on monster, and I have been in touch with sandrine two days later.
  • I think it's not a coincidence.
  • when I read your job offer it was so clear for me, I said to myself, i really want that job, You'll see I am not in the rush to fond a job, but i can't miss that chance.
  • I really know what I want to do, and I really want that job, And I am so consciencious, so passionated, I will not deceive you, I can promise.

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    • Since I finished my master degree, I have started working at Boston scientific for one year? during that year I have been in charge of three main projects.
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    • Then I manage the creation of a key opinions leaders database, the aim of that project was to facilitate the search of KOL who match the best to be the main speaker during a symposia or a medical congress.
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    • The last one, was the development of an e-learning tool, in order to educate patient about their heart disease.
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    • This job teach me how to be really flexible and efficient, I am able to understand really quickly the business of different area and I am really rigourous.
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    • when I read your job offer it was so clear for me, I said to myself, i really want that job, You'll see I am not in the rush to fond a job, but i can't miss that chance.
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    • I really know what I want to do, and I really want that job, And I am so consciencious, so passionated, I will not deceive you, I can promise.
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