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    • Perception.

    • Sometimes, I like to spend my personal time at alone.
    • When I am alone in home I listen a music, I incude a music very loud and dance with my dog.
    • If I am in home also alone and at a street goes a rain and run many many dark clouds, then I like to watch on the people, how they are all running under roof of house or roof of halt and how they snand and feel yourself concerned or even crushed.
    • Sometimes it looks funny and I think how is good I am in my home where is warm and cozy.
    • And then I take in my hands a favorite book and immerse there with my head.

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    • If I am in home also alone and at a street goes a rain and run many many dark clouds, then I like to watch on the people, how they are all running under roof of house or roof of halt and how they snand and feel yourself concerned or even crushed.
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