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    • Hi to everybody , my name's Roberto ,i'm 19 and i live in italy.I love everything of England and next year i 'll come in England to try to learn fluent english for a few month with the erasmus .
    • In the future after finished my studies in economy i'd like to move in your country and search for a job in the finance or in some company in the sector of marketing .

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    • Hi to everybody , my name's Roberto ,i'm 19 and i live in italy.I love everything of England and next year i 'll come in England to try to learn fluent english for a few month with the erasmus .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Hi to everybody , my name's Roberto ,i, I'm 19 and iI live in italy. I love everything of England and next year i I'll come into England to try to learn fluent eEnglish for a few month with the erasmus .
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    • Hi to everybody , my name' is Roberto ,i'm 19 and i live in italy.I love everything of England and next year i 'll come ingo to England to try to learn fluent english for a few months with the erasmus .
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • In the future after finished my studies in economy i'd like to move in your country and search for a job in the finance or in some company in the sector of marketing .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In the future after finisheding my studies in economy i, I'd like to move in your country and search for a job in the finance or in some company in the sector of marketing .
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