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    • Cyberaddiction

  • Cyberaddiction is also a kind of illness.
    • Saying about this we mean a broad concept which starting from online games and ending by overdozed spending of time in social networks, total dependence of different gajets, smartphones.
    • Sympthoms of the cyberaddiction are the same as sympthoms of other addictions: emotional disorders, problems with communications to people, problems withthe concentration of attention, apathy, depression and so on...Such an addiction also leads to physical desease, for example: impaired of vision, problems with the neck and spine, hemorrhoid.

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    • Saying about this we mean a broad concept which starting from online games and ending by overdozed spending of time in social networks, total dependence of different gajets, smartphones.
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    • Saying aboutBy this weI mean a broad concept which startings from online games and , spending by overdozed spending oftoo much time ion social networks and, finally, total dependence ofn different gajdgets, such as smartphones.
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    • Sympthoms of the cyberaddiction are the same as sympthoms of other addictions: emotional disorders, problems with communications to people, problems withthe concentration of attention, apathy, depression and so on...Such an addiction also leads to physical desease, for example: impaired of vision, problems with the neck and spine, hemorrhoid.
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    • SThe sympthoms of the cyber addiction are the same as sympthomse of other addictions:. For example, people suffering from emotional disorders, have problems with communications to people, problems withthe concentration of attention, apathy,ng with others, they are unable to concentrate, exhibit apathetic behaviors, suffer from depression and so on... Such an addiction can also leads tocause physical deseaseisabilities, for example:, impaired of vision, problems with the neck and spine, problems and hemorrhoid.
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