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It's a cause essay. Is it correct?

• In recent decades, air pollution has been soared considerably.

• In some cases, they are very disastrous and difficult to prevent from happening, but pollution from them isn't very often.

• The other one is human activities that can cause serious problems.

• The first one is burning fossil fuels that emit many pollutants such as, CO, SO2 and NOx in the environment.

• Power plants combust a massive amount of fossil fuels such as gas and coal to generate electricity.

• In addition, cars, trucks, airplanes, trains and the other vehicles burn lost of fossil fuels such as petroleum and gasoline to work, and emit harmful gases.

• The second is emissions from industrial factories that evicted high amounts of CO, hydrocarbons and particulates.

• Third, in agriculture, the use of pesticides and fertilizers have been risen in agriculture over last decades, and it causes ammonia based compands release increasingly in the air.

• Next, many products that are used in our homes emited toxic chemicals.

• For example, cleaning products, painting supplies, hair sprays and....

• During a mining process that is contained drilling, extracting, blasting and transportation many chemicals such as CO, SO2, CH4 and other dust are released in the air.