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  • Talking about my city

    • hello everybody.
    • My name is André I have been living in Santos for only 1.5 years and I am in love with this city.I can proudly say that I made a great decision moving to Santos and I am happiest with the quality of life I have in this beautiful city.
    • I usually stroll with my family in Municipal Orchidarium, that is definitely one of the most beautiful park in the city.
    • It has about 800 animals from 100 different species, including reptiles, birds and mammals that live in an environment similar to the Atlantic Forest those containing lakes, lawns and trails.
    • A great place that you can interact with animals and nature.
    • There are many activates to do if you are a visitor, you should walking on the beach, eat and drink in a good restaurant, skydiving, visit the aquarium, watch shows of dancing and theater and others unique experiences.
    • But we also have problems here, like flooding the streets, so you must not to go to Northwest zone, and peripheral neighborhoods where it is more common because the infrastructure is less prepar than Gonzaga.Then I am changing and doing my part to solve this.
    • I stopped to put junk on the street I`m recycling and always is possible I recommend people to do this.
    • You can enjoy a single cove that forms beautiful beaches with clean waters and also you should go back to the past visited the Coffee Museum, the War Train House, the Mauá Square, Brito's Saturnian Palace, the Colosseum Theater, and the Nossa Senhora do Rosario Church.
    • Santos is not perfect BUT is improving with this group. #ILoveSantos

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    • My name is André I have been living in Santos for only 1.5 years and I am in love with this city.I can proudly say that I made a great decision moving to Santos and I am happiest with the quality of life I have in this beautiful city.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My name is André. I have been living in Santos for only 1.5 years and I am in love with this city. I can proudly say that I made a great decision moving to Santos and I am happiest with the quality of life I have in this beautiful city.
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    • I usually stroll with my family in Municipal Orchidarium, that is definitely one of the most beautiful park in the city.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I usually stroll with my family in Municipal Orchidarium, that is definitely one of the most beautiful parks in the city.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • It has about 800 animals from 100 different species, including reptiles, birds and mammals that live in an environment similar to the Atlantic Forest those containing lakes, lawns and trails.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It has about 800 animals from 100 different species, including reptiles, birds and mammals that live in an environment similar to the Atlantic Forest those, containing lakes, lawns and trails.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • There are many activates to do if you are a visitor, you should walking on the beach, eat and drink in a good restaurant, skydiving, visit the aquarium, watch shows of dancing and theater and others unique experiences.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There are many activates to do if you are a visitor, y. You should try walking on the beach, eating and drinking in a good restaurant, skydiving, visiting the aquarium, watch shows ofing dancing andshows, theater and others unique experiences.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • But we also have problems here, like flooding the streets, so you must not to go to Northwest zone, and peripheral neighborhoods where it is more common because the infrastructure is less prepar than Gonzaga.Then I am changing and doing my part to solve this.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But we also have problems here, like flooding in the streets, so you must not to go to the Northwest zone, and peripheral neighborhoods where it is more common, because the infrastructure is less prepardeveloped than in Gonzaga.Then I am changing and doing my part to solve this.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • You can enjoy a single cove that forms beautiful beaches with clean waters and also you should go back to the past visited the Coffee Museum, the War Train House, the Mauá Square, Brito's Saturnian Palace, the Colosseum Theater, and the Nossa Senhora do Rosario Church.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • You can enjoy a single cove that forms beautiful beaches with clean waters and also you should go back to the past in visiteding the Coffee Museum, the War Train House, the Mauá Square, Brito's Saturnian Palace, the Colosseum Theater, and the Nossa Senhora do Rosario Church.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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