Korjaukset

Text from baltowolf - English

  • a letter

  • Hello.
  • It is great to hear from you, that your company is growing and has gotten a new success.
  • At first, I would like to appologize for my silence during all these years - I just have had nothing to answer you and did not want to give you any blind hopes about me.
  • My german is not sufficient for any german speaking job now and even for just living in Germany and I do not know when exectly I will have eventually achieved my purpose.
  • I had to take a huge pause in my German learning because of some private reasons but at the beginning of this year I decided to come back to learning German and now I am inside this process again.
  • I created my own study plan and strive to stick to it.
  • Of course, the main problem is a time: sometimes a have less than one half an hour in a day for studying - this is not enough and certainly I have no practice on my job.
  • Everything goes too slow for me now.
  • I have already decided to spend my time in this year for study German, improve my programming skills and that is why I am not thinking about any big changes in my life in this year, and your letter was a big surprise for me.
  • I am still interested to work with you, but as I mentioned above, my german skills is too bad now and it is not allowed me to feel comfortable in a foreign country - I just need a little bit more time.
  • Otherwise Your offer seems very interesting for me and I like it very much and I would like to know more about this opportunity.
  • Could you please answer on some questions?
  • Will I have a chance to start working in your company somewhen in the next year?
  • I think that I will have had enough german skills to feel more confident in a typical daily life situations, of course, it will not b2 level, but pretty enough just for living.
  • Will I have any help in searching a flat and preparing all necessary documents?
  • I have heard that in many cities in germany it is not so easy to find a flat, especially for foreigners.
  • Is it possible for me to have a list of technologies of my first project?
  • Due to this list I can understand where I have gaps in my knowledge and can fill them and prepare for my future job, become more useful and successful, and start giving the result of my work a little bit quicker.
  • I have attached my CV as well - may be you can find something new and usefull there.
  • Thank you very much for your attention to my honest personality.
  • I hope see you soon.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • At first, I would like to appologize for my silence during all these years - I just have had nothing to answer you and did not want to give you any blind hopes about me.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
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    • My german is not sufficient for any german speaking job now and even for just living in Germany and I do not know when exectly I will have eventually achieved my purpose.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
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    • I had to take a huge pause in my German learning because of some private reasons but at the beginning of this year I decided to come back to learning German and now I am inside this process again.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
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    • Of course, the main problem is a time: sometimes a have less than one half an hour in a day for studying - this is not enough and certainly I have no practice on my job.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7
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    • I have already decided to spend my time in this year for study German, improve my programming skills and that is why I am not thinking about any big changes in my life in this year, and your letter was a big surprise for me.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9
  • Lause 10
    • I am still interested to work with you, but as I mentioned above, my german skills is too bad now and it is not allowed me to feel comfortable in a foreign country - I just need a little bit more time.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10
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    • Otherwise Your offer seems very interesting for me and I like it very much and I would like to know more about this opportunity.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11
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    • I think that I will have had enough german skills to feel more confident in a typical daily life situations, of course, it will not b2 level, but pretty enough just for living.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14
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    • Due to this list I can understand where I have gaps in my knowledge and can fill them and prepare for my future job, become more useful and successful, and start giving the result of my work a little bit quicker.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 18
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