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    • Summary exercise - The importance of Breakfast for students.

    • seven children frequently goes to school without having breakfast.
    • The consequence of skipping this important meal is that primary school pupils lose almost 8,4 weeks of their learning time because lack of food is the main responsible for losing concentration in the classroom.
    • Also, many teachers witnessed students falling asleep just for skipping breakfast.
    • The main reason for this phenomenon is connected to the increasing level of poverty that British families have been suffering in the last few decades of the 21st century.
    • Foodbank charities such as Oxfam has revealed that many British have fallen on hard times and have to rely on charities food ration to survive.
  • Some experts have suggested that breakfast clubs might be a feasible solution to allow children to be fed before going to school.
    • A school business manager launched this solution eight years ago with great benefits to the pupils of St.Geroge Primary School in Manchester.
    • However, government cutbacks have obliged lots of breakfast club to shut down.
    • In an attempt to help schools, Kellog's has decided to launch a campaign to feed school children in the most deprived areas of England.
    • The initiative consisted of donating a meal to a child each time a meal every time a special pack of cereal is bought from a supermarket or when a breakfast club shares a video on the company's webpage, so that poor parents won't have to struggle to provide a meal to their children.

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    • The consequence of skipping this important meal is that primary school pupils lose almost 8,4 weeks of their learning time because lack of food is the main responsible for losing concentration in the classroom.
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    • The consequence of skipping this important meal is that primary school pupils lose almost 8,, on average, 8.4 weeks of their learning time because lack of food is the main responsible forcausing them to losinge concentration in the classroom.
    • The consequence of skipping this important meal is that primary school pupils lose almostpproximately 8,.4 weeks of their learning time because lack of food is the main responsible forcauses them to losinge concentration in the classroom.
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    • The main reason for this phenomenon is connected to the increasing level of poverty that British families have been suffering in the last few decades of the 21st century.
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    • The main reason for this phenomenon is connected to the increasing level of poverty that British families have been sufferinged in the last few decades of the 21st century.
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    • Foodbank charities such as Oxfam has revealed that many British have fallen on hard times and have to rely on charities food ration to survive.
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    • Foodbank charities such as Oxfam hasve revealed that many British have fallen on hard times and have to rely on charities food ration to survive.
    • Foodbank charities such as Oxfam hasve revealed that many British families have fallen on hard times and havethey had to rely on food charities food ration to survive.
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    • Some experts have suggested that breakfast clubs might be a feasible solution to allow children to be fed before going to school.
      Vote now!
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    • A school business manager launched this solution eight years ago with great benefits to the pupils of St.Geroge Primary School in Manchester.
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    • A school business manager launched this solution eight years ago with great benefits to the pupils of St. Gerorge Primary School in Manchester.
    • A school business manager launched this solution eight years ago withand it proved to be of great benefits to the pupils of St.Gerorge Primary School in Manchester.
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    • In an attempt to help schools, Kellog's has decided to launch a campaign to feed school children in the most deprived areas of England.
      Vote now!
    • In an attempt to help schools, Kellogg's has decided to launch a campaign to feed school children in the most deprivedpoorest areas of England.
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    • The initiative consisted of donating a meal to a child each time a meal every time a special pack of cereal is bought from a supermarket or when a breakfast club shares a video on the company's webpage, so that poor parents won't have to struggle to provide a meal to their children.
      Vote now!
    • The initiative consisted ofaim of this initiative is to donatinge a meal to a child each time a meal every time a special pack of cereal is bought from a supermarket or when a breakfast club shares a video on the company's web page, so that poor parents won't have to struggle to provide a meal tofor their children.
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