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    • every graduating student to take public speaking course

    • Various points of view which are relevant to the matter being discussed, bring us to the moot question of whether the graduating student should take the public speaking course at the university during their study period or not.
    • A large number of people have the opinion that the former is beneficial for students whereas other holds exactly the opposite view and argue that it is not necessary for the students.
    • I content that universities provide an opportunity for graduating student to take the public speaking course.
    • The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on the number of issues in this framework.
    • The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that public speaking class helps the student to improve their self-esteem in the future.
  • It helps them to lecture and present their scientific ability.
    • Some students are smart and have excellent performance at the university, but they do not have enough self-confidence to show their skills and knowledge.
    • So they must have enough confidence to convey their knowledge.
    • The best way of increasing self-esteem such student that takes the public speaking course.
    • In this class, they learn how to speak in the public and how to transfer their mean to the audience.
    • I remember when I was a graduating student I attended in one of Public speaking class at my university.
    • Before that, I was a shy person, and I could not speak in public.
    • In this class, I learned to present in front of thirty persons.
    • It was the first time that I present in public, and it provides me with an opportunity to increase my self-esteem.
    • The second reason is coming to mind to substantiate my viewpoint is concerned with this issue that it ensures their future career.
    • Many jobs are relevant to people, and these jobs need to contact other people for flourishing.
    • Some students after graduation, work as a teacher.
    • They must have an ability to speak in front of their students.
    • They must teach materials and convey their knowledge that learned at the university in the best way.
    • Therefore they need the ability of the general speaking.
  • As in the case, there is a body of an article that I read recently.
    • The researchers of this article investigated a group of student who became a teacher after graduation.
    • The results showed those student who took the public speaking course during the study period were more successful in transferring their knowledge to their student and their student learned better than others because of teachers performance during the semester.
    • Therefore, attending in public speaking class in the university helps student job as a teacher.
    • In ending up the discussion on this arguable point, thinking those mentioned above, one can easily guess that public speaking course provides not only an opportunity for the student to improve their self-confidence but also it helps them for the future jobs.
    • Nevertheless, that was a story in a nutshell.
    • There are many details, worth discussing, which are not mentioned here.

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  • câu 1
    • Various points of view which are relevant to the matter being discussed, bring us to the moot question of whether the graduating student should take the public speaking course at the university during their study period or not.
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    • Various points of view which are relevant to the matter being discussed, bring us to the moot question of whether thea graduating student should take the public speaking course at the university during their study period, or not.
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    • A large number of people have the opinion that the former is beneficial for students whereas other holds exactly the opposite view and argue that it is not necessary for the students.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A large number of people have the opinion that the former is beneficial for students, whereas others holds exactly the opposite view and argue that it is not necessary for the students.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • I content that universities provide an opportunity for graduating student to take the public speaking course.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I contentd that universities provide an opportunity for graduating student to take the public speaking course.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on the number of issues in this framework.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on thea number of issues in this framework.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that public speaking class helps the student to improve their self-esteem in the future.
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    • The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that a public speaking class will helps the student to improve their self-esteem in the future.
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    • Some students are smart and have excellent performance at the university, but they do not have enough self-confidence to show their skills and knowledge.
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    • Some students are smart and have excellent performance at thevery well at university, but they do not have enough self-confidence to showdemonstrate their skills and knowledge.
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    • The best way of increasing self-esteem such student that takes the public speaking course.
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    • The best way ofsuch a student can increasinge their self-esteem such student thatis to takes the public speaking course.
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    • I remember when I was a graduating student I attended in one of Public speaking class at my university.
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    • I remember when I was a graduatinge student I attended in one of Pthe public speaking classes at my university.
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    • It was the first time that I present in public, and it provides me with an opportunity to increase my self-esteem.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It was the first time that I presented in public, and it providesded me with an opportunity to increase my self-esteem.
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    • The second reason is coming to mind to substantiate my viewpoint is concerned with this issue that it ensures their future career.
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    • The second reason isthat cominges to mind to substantiate my viewpoint is concerned withon this issue is that it ensures their future career.
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    • Many jobs are relevant to people, and these jobs need to contact other people for flourishing.
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    • Many jobs are relevant toinvolve interacting with people, and in these jobs needit is necessary to contact other people forto flourishing.
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    • They must teach materials and convey their knowledge that learned at the university in the best way.
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    • They must teach materials and convey their knowledge that they learned at the university in the best way possible.
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    • The results showed those student who took the public speaking course during the study period were more successful in transferring their knowledge to their student and their student learned better than others because of teachers performance during the semester.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The results showed those student whos that took the public speaking course during the study period were more successful in transferring their knowledge to their students and their students learned better than others because of teachers performance during the semester.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • Therefore, attending in public speaking class in the university helps student job as a teacher.
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    • Therefore, attending in public speaking class in the university helps student job as a teacherbe a better teacher in the future.
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    • In ending up the discussion on this arguable point, thinking those mentioned above, one can easily guess that public speaking course provides not only an opportunity for the student to improve their self-confidence but also it helps them for the future jobs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In ending up the discussion on this arguable point, thinking those mentioned above, one can easily guess thatTo sum up, a public speaking course provides not only an opportunity for the student to improve their self-confidence but it will also it helps them forin their future jobs.
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